I know your waiting

I know we are far apart

You didn't like it from the start

I didn't want you to go away

I beg you if you could stay

Now I am a long way from home

In your arms is where I belong

Try my hardest to get to where you are

Every night I stare at the stars

Hoping that you can hear me, hear my cries through all these lies

I need to be with you

I'll shout it from the rooftops.. 

Reviews

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

The world is a cruel place sometimes, especially when we lose the one we love. All this time, i've read this, and held the tears back because it is so true. The truth hurts, and it's hard to know the one you loved is so far gone! However, this poem is written from the core of your being, shouting what we all have felt before. And yet, it's short and bittersweet. I loved it, truly loved it!

[Nihilum]

I love it. I like how it's sad, but it also makes you want to smile

[JeremyTims]

The one that we love always seems to be so far away and their are so many things that go wrong but this right hear shows that you will always stay true to him and this is really wonderful and beautiful.

[Hoosier Belle]

So profound and wonderfully stated!

[Diane]

I so get this, to many times have I felt this way but I never worded it so beautifully.

[Death Girl]

I think that you ment to say stay instead of say but that is an esy fix. I love it.

[Boldpen]

The beauty continues.
Another heart felt write from you. Really remarkable. The rhyme scheme was as powerful as words and expressions were beautiful.
As you always do, it also took reader to a different world. Great job!

[Nathaniel12]

i think you ment to say " i beg you if you could stay" otherwise i loved it i give it two thunbs up

[Dylan S.]

I like this one. It reminds me of something I wrote before, when I felt that distance is a heartbreaker. And I love your rhyme scheme. Nice flow.