Rectangle

Rectangle

A Poem by SimplyDisastrous

I am a very special shape; I have four sides and four lines straight.

 Look beyond my words, and see the shape that I am destined to

 Be. I'm not just random words drawn out of thin air,   I am much

 More than that. I am a quadrilateral with four right angles and I

 Have two lines of reflectional symmetry and rotational symmetry.

 My angles are rectilinear; my sides meet at right angles. You

 Learn this at school with your ABC's, practice your studies and

 You will see some other fine examples of me.

 

© 2010 SimplyDisastrous


Author's Note

SimplyDisastrous
Concrete form poetry.

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This poem is so true and yes I do believe this is very concrete. This poem also encorages you to learn more about shapes especially for those who don't know much about maths. I never enjoyed maths at high school the only reason why I liked the lesson was because the maths teacher was DAMN HOT..blush.... This poem also takes me back to nursery when I first learnt to count and recognise names of shapes. I find this a great poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is awesone!!! great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful points here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What great description from the point of a rectangle.
I loved this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is so true and yes I do believe this is very concrete. This poem also encorages you to learn more about shapes especially for those who don't know much about maths. I never enjoyed maths at high school the only reason why I liked the lesson was because the maths teacher was DAMN HOT..blush.... This poem also takes me back to nursery when I first learnt to count and recognise names of shapes. I find this a great poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, it's a rectangle, so that part is good. I feel like the rectangle is trying to be more than it is. An excellent form of personification as well concrete poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 28, 2010
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SimplyDisastrous
SimplyDisastrous

Hartford, CT



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Hey. I used to be on here alot when I was 15. Now, not so much. I'm 18 now and I'm not nearly as depressing as I used to be, but still depressing enough. Message me and feel free to read my old poems... more..

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