I'm feeling like...

I’m feeling like…

 

 

 

I’m feeling like there’s nothing left for me.

I’m feeling like there’s no point in me trying to be.

Like all I want to do right now is rest in peace

Even though I’ve never held a good place in my heart for the deceased.

A sad feeling, it lies at the pit of my heart.

But I guess it was always there, from the miserable start.

I look nervously into my contemptuous hell

Wishing, pleading, that this depression does not dwell

Its voice sweet like velvet, it whispers to me in the night,

But, Kristen, I’m your friend, it says

And I’ll be here until your tragic end.

And I think, why not just give in,

And commit the desired sin?

There’s no one around

It will hurt, but it will be too quick for anyone to hear the sound

Why not? Why can’t I just end it all?

But then I answer my own question: I don’t have the gall.

I can’t do it. I’m scared. I don’t have the nerve.

But now, I’m just thinking:

Until I get over this fear, this little plan of mines will be on the reserve.

 

Author's Note

That title is under construction. I only put that there for lack of a much better title. I want to change it. I was never any good at making titles. If you have any ideas, tell me in your reviews. This is how I feel, so this is what I wrote. Obviously, I'm not feeling very happy. I feel empty almost.

Reviews

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Well...my suggestion for the title would be "Empty...Thoughtlessness."...
but that's just me and if you take it straight away it would sound like my work instead...

This write was okay, I guess many people could easily be relate with this...
nice write

[David W Moore III]

a very bad place to be, looking down from the top of a cliff. i've been there and it is a living hell. i will say (at least in my case) i did get past it, and there were and are things that i am glad i did not miss. once you can get past the wall that is in front of you, things will release, without having to use your little plan.
Shadow Friend?

[Kesha]

I'm sure almost everybody can relate to this, I know I can, but yeah just remember that there are more days to come, a wonderful poem and a great choice of words! :)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

I always say: write best when your sad, well this fits here. I hope you feel better, but when your in a hard time, just remenber: There are more days to come, some new, some old. But you have to realize that one rusty day, always gets better. It may not be the following day, but neverless it's there hiding, waiting for you to find it.

Best wishes -
Kelsie

[Cynthia]

I’m feeling like…

That's a nice topic!!! Don't change it, of course others suggestion is good too, but it's just as long as you love it, it's fine!! All you need to d, is love your writing!!
Beautiful!

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is sometime a hard journey. Can't see any reason to go forward. Sometime we need to listen to our inner mind. Sometime our raw emotion will keep us safe and sound. If it feel wrong. Maybe your instinct telling you to be careful. Never give up. The world is large and there is a place for the each of us. A powerful poem. You made me think.
Coyote

[JelliFyshKissUs]

A turbulent stay of discontent emotions.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is how I feel too...most of the time...I guess that's why I used to cut...but stopped for the people that cared about me most...like Ben....
now Cody...
I love this poem though...