(W)Hole(s)

We all have holes that are part of a whole that we will never get back

help me look inside
my-
self aware of nothing
not a thing to
find(ing)
holes
where
am I
lost?

my arms are open
wide(r)
than the holes
in my
head(ing)
to you
reaching
out
to me.

Reviews

[daemok]

I didn't know what to think when I first read this. The second time I finally got the rhythm and the third time it dawned on me that this is masterful!
Here in the way you spaced each word (some having more than one meaning) you've made the reader stop and take in each line. I had to let it sink in and now I'm caught on the hook. More.

[w]

This was a fluke. I have tried to writ e more like it and failed. It is something that only time will allow me to touch again.

[EileenMarie]

I too had to reread several times to fully understand the brilliance! Great write!

[w]

Thank you so much.

[Patrick]

my first read of your work..got me reading it several times and got me thinking several things...so must have had the desired effect. Great work

[w]

Thank you. This is the only experimental piece in my gallery like this.

[Amelie]

Experimental yet masterfully done. Inventive yet with conviction. Your cunning methods are impressive, as if you don't care if it'll be a hit or a miss. But then, you'd always pull it off. Another awesome write fella.

[w]

You flatter me. Thank you.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Ive never read anything like this, its different and I love it well done

[w]

Thank you.

[Lily Mae]

Unique and well written.. Your creativity is endless :)

[w]

You flatter me.

[MOON]

You expressed it well the hole whole. Very good write

[words of rooted design]

This is unique. I like it very much!

[GunMetal]

Cerebral is the perfect word for this. It has layers to it, which are subtle, but the layers don't hide each other. You did not disappoint with this.