Pleasured

Pleasured

A Poem by w
"

Lyrics to a song dancing in my head

"
Here we are again:
you down on your knees
begging me, "Please
let me please you" again.

And I can't look into your eyes
and tell you no anymore.
I know I'm the cause
behind all of your sores
and I can't tell you that
I'm sorry without crying
and you know I don't cry,
not in front of you anyway.

So girl please please me
just let me see me
inside of you
and I will never
have to cry
again.

Long stares
and unhealthy glares
lead us to display our wares
in a manner that is ungraceful
for anyone who was raised
how you and I were raised

So instead of staring,
glaring and over sharing
just please me
how you want to
and forget about
the world
tonight,
tomorrow
and forever.

Forget about so much
that you forget yourself
and you forget me
and all that remains is us
together, pleased, happy
and pleasured.

© 2012 w


Author's Note

w
I can't play a lick so if you can and this speaks to you let me know.

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I really loved this. Excellent work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A very sensual song about make up sex? nice, tastefully done :) Can't think of any tunes to go with though , I can't play a lick either.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Are you planning on adding more? A defined chorus? Just curious. I really like it. It has that air of desperation that makes it really intriguing. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

w

8 Years Ago

Thought of a chorus, but just came up with an instrumental break. If something comes to me I will al.. read more

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I climb inside my mind through the windows to the soul that I sold for a kiss in the fourth grade. I write about the adventures I have in my schizophrenic mind and the scars that my past has left. .. more..

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