Exam

Ever be so shy to talk to a girl that you have wanted to talk to forever. This is the process for me and I am hoping many other people agree with me.

Having studied the whole week,

Face in the books every night till 2am,

thinking, solving, memorizing all for this one moment.

The test all those sleepless nights leading to this moment.

I walk into the room legs and hands shaking,

heart pounding in my chest, 

throat tightening becoming parched like a desert.

My mind races recalling all the knowledge that I have gained 

Oh why did I think I could do this?

No I can't, this is to great a task? 

What happens if I say or do something wrong ?

I'm not going to do this. I am going to do this. Ahhhhh

I can do this. I walk over head held high 

I know what I am going but the word that comes out is 

a stutter of hi

Oh no she's going to laugh. I'm a fool.

But she smiles and here eyes twinkle and says hi. 

My heart flutters and my throat untightens and words come out naturally. 

I then ask the question "can I get your number?"

I hold my breath and wait for the result.  

 

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

Hi, I don’t know you had these emotions felt, because you have been in and looked like you need fast paced and can’t wait. Even now you make the same mistake of hiding what you actually go through. I love that boy who had gone through the emotional turmoil for her. It means so much to know about that love filled eyes what they have gone through till 2am not getting sleep and at that early morning hours satisfying going to see her in few more hours finally. Glad you are sharing your past at the brink of death of her. Atleast she lies down with peace thinking my eyes are not cheated by but a adorable love with a miss of life with him she had who she risked for him without thinking a second but still with love for him she remains over and in the soil.

[Zoe Richardson]

I'd like to know what books you studied that helped you ask a girl for her number. They could be international bestsellers! I love how the beginning of the poem takes you down one road and then the last part rears up and surprises you with a totally unexpected outcome. Nicely done!

[Scott888]

Thank you for the review.

[Arundass TP]

A universal behaviour, of students. I too experienced like this, but I sit cool. Good poem 😂

[Scott888]

Thanks for reading my poem. I was wondering if you had any suggestions for changes that could make my poem better?

[Arundass TP]

Poem can be more colorful only if read few times and go on editing. Putting more musical apt words. Good work. Have a nice day 😊