ITS THE END

Sometimes or many i may be wrong,
for which today i am sorry for my soul. 
Pained a lot today ,
in fact it did happened earlier. 


was bothered least for me,
as i found me in you,
but Today its a clear sky,
a lot more true,


let my life be boring as before,
let my soul rest in dark,
let me sleep in peace,
a long sleep without dreaming you. . 
I wanna lay deep still forever,
rather than crying awake. 


For the above i am leaving,
as it was ,
and i promise my soul won't insist,
as nothing really did existed.
All was fake and at last am sorry for my heart for getting f***** by you

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

Well... that says it all! Admit defeat and move on is message here. As before, nicely written and certain to inspire.

[Moriarty]

Very raw...but is sooo there!!! nice write

[CHRIS ANDES]

what a great emotions in it
nice piece=]

[Ink Angel]

Reviewed this already very very sad :(

[Mak Goalie]

oh my god......i really loved this..............its really sth i was waiting to read

[Queen Empress]

Nice poem :)) from heart break to moving on.keep it up!

[Monica]

Nice write! You express your emotions with strength and I like that.

"let my life be boring as before,
let my soul rest in dark,
let me sleep in peace,
a long sleep without dreaming you. .
I wanna lay deep still forever,
rather than crying awake."

...I like this stanza. You described what your heart, mind, and soul needs to move on and heal beyond this heartbreak.
Well done, Keep writing! :)

[Pritesh]

Nicely written poem!!!!!!!

[Amila Jay]

Very nice write :))

[Dayran]

The substance that stores and conveys knowledge to us, as much influences the content of our experience. An anger is built on the quality of fire. Love perhaps on water. If they are at fault, one may substitute fire for love, but the answer may lie in the possibility of bringing fire and water together so that one does not extinguish the other.