CARRYING IT BIT MORE FURTHER

CARRYING IT BIT MORE FURTHER

A Poem by $êlvån
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Sometime we come across certain situation in our life when we unwillingly try to change ourself.It can be in any prospect of life but this poem tries to deal with a decision to forget ones love!!!

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I feared for all,
for i would get drifted again,
drenched in same leaves,
brunt in same thrills,
and once again would neutralize,
all those fake walls,
all those misty fogs...

Leading like unreal,
seemed new for me,
so i wondered if,
i could,
take it bit more further,
cheer it for more longer,
before undoing,
my mask again,
my thoughts again....

Living against my will,
i tried to do all possible,
some beyond impossible,
but once i heard,
it being called practical,
so i hope,
to carry more further,
to hang bit more,
before i would,
open it all,
in your eyes,
in your voice......

© 2012 $êlvån


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Gosh, how i can relate. This is really good. And it touches me deeply. I have had to do that. Letting go of someone you loved is probably the hardest things in life to go through. It's not easy... it never is. But.. sometimes change is necessary during such aches.. But don't be too down, because if you truely decide to let go of someone, there will be another person who will cheer you and accept you. =)
Love is mysterious and simply.. too complex to understand. ha ha.. >.<
Beautiful write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Gosh, how i can relate. This is really good. And it touches me deeply. I have had to do that. Letting go of someone you loved is probably the hardest things in life to go through. It's not easy... it never is. But.. sometimes change is necessary during such aches.. But don't be too down, because if you truely decide to let go of someone, there will be another person who will cheer you and accept you. =)
Love is mysterious and simply.. too complex to understand. ha ha.. >.<
Beautiful write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can totally relate to this. :D This is really beautiful. :D



Posted 9 Years Ago


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Change seems painful but necessary sometimes. Is it practical? In some instances, yes. At others, it seems impractical but also needed. It is all choice. But it seems to me, we all have to change at some points in our life, if for nothing more then to keep what we don't want to lose.
Very interesting write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tanx suditi....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow!
This is your best i have read!
The theme, the title, the content, all perfect!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: love, forgetting, fantasy, sad, reason to live, changing, practical, true

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delhi, Humanity, India



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