I Don't Know Erotica

So...can you teach me?

My lover...

I am a poet.

But I don't know erotica.

Will you please...

undress my ignorance

and write me an experience?

I am like a delicate paper,

consumed with the desire to be felt--

Just promise you'll be gentle?

Explore my exposed flesh with poetic touches

and discover a potential universe.

Wrap me inside the wonder of your words...

Until we explode--

in prose and poetry.

Yes...

Lose me in the pages of your passion...

Again and again.

Author's Note

*Blush* I'm not comfortable with free verse. And erotica.

Reviews

[Nusquam Esse]

This is actually quite clever, nice usage of double-entendres and innuendo... but at the same time it doesn't feel crass or crude. Quite an accomplishment! Good job on leaving your comfort zone, you made something special here!

[Blue]

Thank you, Nusquam. I'll respond to your message tomorrow. I've got other things to do. It's always good to hear from you, anyway. :)

[icelandicblue]

You did a fabulous job with your double entendres and your clever word choices.

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Ice. I always look forward to your reviews.

[A. Amos]

Good sweet poem, i enjoyed

[Blue]

Thank you, Amos.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is really great, and it is sensual, and very sweet with just a touch of maybe ... one question with regard to tense, I would think you'd should be you'll ...

[Blue]

Aww, you noticed! Thank you for pointing it out. And for the review as well. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah, that's kind of what I am known for around here, but if you want a grammar correction, I can usually help you out ...

[Blue]

Grammar police to the rescue! :P

[Relic]

You many not be comfortable with free verse but you're a natural at it. This goes inside and between the lines with great metaphor and similes. You did an excellent job on this.

100/100

[Blue]

Thank you, Relic. Free verse always take mores time to write, more revisions to make. For me, that is.

[Robert Strzalko]

I found this piece to be very original and interesting.

[Blue]

Thank you, Robert.

[Robert Strzalko]

You're welcome.

[Robert Strzalko]

Yes, lose me in the pages of your passion again and again...

[Angel]

I'm blushing, too...also not comfortable with either of those things.
However, unlike ol' Granny, here, you seem to have mastered both of them, in this amazing piece.
Kudos on trying something new...and doing such a magnificent job with them both!!

I am in awe of your talent, Ma'am.

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Angel. Same goes to you as well. Your inclination to spiritual writings is inspiring.

[Lydia Shutter]

Fantastic metaphor in this elegantly sensual write. My dear, you DO know erotica....and this is proof. Lydi**

[Blue]

Thank you, Lydia!