Played

If you give me your time
If you fix what is broken,
If in my darkness you climb
You'll receive quite a token.
But if you think loves cheep,
If you think I'm a game
Then you'll sow what you reap,
You'll go down with shame.
I'll watch as you fall
A broken smile on my face.
In the abyss I will call
"Did you think you where ace?
I've been broken before,
I've learned how it's played.
Watch out for the floor,
You shouldn't have swayed."

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Scerina Elizabeth]

Very well written and I love how you describe it...

Awesome poem :)

[Sam]

Thank you!!

[Scerina Elizabeth]

your welcome :)