Naked Canvas

Show me your best brushstrokes.

Naked Canvas

by alice oiseau

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So soft, so light

are the fingertips that

paint upon my canvas this velvet night.

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Brushstrokes of scarlet against pale porcelain

with torrid minutes where our breaths are

carried on the wings of angels.

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Lip to lip like rolling pearls and

cradled in silk ribbons,

I hold on to you through the ballet.

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The fire caught in your eyes

and candlelight shadows dancing on the walls,

Matching the fervently beating pulse across every inch of me.

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Sweetest nectar

of purest honey,

I drink you in.

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Oh! so soft, so light

are the fingertips that

paint upon my canvas this velvet night.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Discreet erotica.

Reviews

[Jibey]

This was a very lovely read, with images piling on - the canvas, the velvet, the porcelain, the pearls and the ribbon, the ballet, the nectar. A feast of riches! But the effect was to feel the artistry of the lovemaking and to sense the pure delight of the sensual pleasure... I think I would have enjoyed it too... *smiles*

[bluessadmood]

Love is like a symphony,I always said that..
Soft and light your fingertips paint on my canvas tonight
Brush strokes on pale skin where our breaths are carried softly on a wind
Lip to lip roll like pearls,as I hold onto you through the whole ballet,see fires in your eyes
Shadows cast by candle lights,all match the fever of my pulse carried across every inch of me
Sweet nectar I drink you in..soft so light these finger tips roll on my canvas on this sweet velvet night
so so lovely write..

[fireblossom]

Another well put together poem from a very talented writer. Although...this poem seems to keep the reader a step away from emotion. It seems to be too well thought out to the point of being more intellectual than emotional. I will read more from you and look for the connection.

[BABSIE BEE]

I loved the way you painted this passionate canvas. Think it could have been longer...so if you add to it...give me a buzz.
Thanks for sharing.
BABSIE BEEXXX

[Saurin Corvinus]

It feels like I was looking at a painting while reading this it was very vivid, and kept me aww struck.

[nostal]

Nice, each line is like a gallery of art-beautiful and completely breathtaking- with its simplicity and imagery.

[Big ol' Kahuna]

Wow! That was truly a work of art! I thought it was so beautiful. The words were intertwined together in a wonderful dance of love. Loved the way it started, loved even more the way it ended, and everything in between. One of the most beautiful poems I can say that I have ever read.

Really outstanding work!

[Jared Hughes]

Very vivid and imaginary. Your use of intelligent vocabulary is very broad and ranging. Something I should utilize more often in my works.

Well done Alice. Keep up the amazing work! :)

Jared Bryant

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is really breathtaking sensual and heart skipping passionate... the imagery is astounding and magical... just love it.