Try Me

Try Me

A Poem by AchingAlexandra
"

Chrostopher Blair Vye, this is for you.

"
Why would you try to msg me?
You are a low-life who never deserved me.
Ever.
I don't understand why I would stoop so low,
to allow you into my life.

What the f**k is up with this?
You start talking to me,
after calling me an emo b***h,
cheating on me,
getting me into smoking,
into drugs,
and say YOUR feelings were authentic?
Saying mine weren't!?
You are a lying,
cheating,
drug-addicted,
a*****e.

You treated me like gold?
Bullshit,
you treated me like dirt.
you want to know WHY I was in the hospital,
for trying to commit suicide in november?
because of YOU.

I don't understand,
why I stooped so low,
let you in,
and let you suck out my soul,
using drugs,
and smoking.

Before you,
I would never have even imagined,
myself falling into the caressing hands,
of weed,
and the stronger,
clutching hands,
of stronger drugs.

One more message,
is all it takes,
To get you locked away.

Try me.

© 2011 AchingAlexandra


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wow! very nice i love this haha! great write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Dude, I will kick you in the f*****g balls.
When I get cursey on your a*s, you know I'm seriously pissed.
How dare you call my best friend an 'emo b***h', cheat on her and then have the f*****g nerve to say your feelings were authentic.?!
Alex, I loved this poem despite its obvious anger and it's reason.
If the douchbag hasn't gotten the point, all you need to do is call me. And problem solved.
1,000,0000,000 and Infinty Stars.! * * * * * * * * * * eyc., etc., etc.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Watch out, Kitty Got Claws =^.^=

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a umm very angry poem. I think you got your point accross to the person so good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a rage write. I'm furious and I swear to god, every word of it is honest.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

He doesn't deserve you, never did. My wife, you deserve so much more.
Oh, and he will pay. I'll be there too if ever he messages you again. Wild, rabid dogs couldn't keep me away

Posted 13 Years Ago



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AchingAlexandra
AchingAlexandra

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I'm a really nice person, but I have a lot of issues. I love writing, it helps ebb the regular pain I have. First name: Courtney Middle Name: Alexandra I'm purely myself. I don't change to fit.. more..

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