Why me ?

Why me ?

A Poem by AchingAlexandra
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My heart hurts , and I've been crying for close to 24 hours . I fear I'll never get better .

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How can one person ,
Be in so much pain ,
yet continue to live ?

How can one heart ,
receive so much pain ,
and yet continue to beat ?

How do two people ,
become so close ,
then feel like strangers ?

How can my heart ,
feel so broken ,
and yet continue to love ?

How can two eyes ,
cry so much ,
and yet still have tears to shed ?

How can My eyes ,
Continue to cry ,
and yet , no one notices ?

How come he knows ,
the pain I'm on now ,
and not try to fix it ?

Why did he do this to me ?

It hurts to breath ,
it hurts to live ,
it hurts to love ,
it hurts more to stop .

How is it possible ,
that I feel so awful ,
my chest hurts so much ,
and yet they say I'll be okay ?

How can no one see how hurt I am ?

How can no one know how badly I hurt ?

How come no one wants to fix my shattered heart ?

© 2012 AchingAlexandra


Author's Note

AchingAlexandra
Just how I feel right now . I really needed to get it out . Feel free to tell me how stupid I'm being and so on .

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Very relatable. And you're not being stupid at all, just a little..dramatic. The feeling you described it spot on, and exactly how I feel most of the time. It's very well written and has a lot of emotion.

A bit of advice though, after you let all these feelings out; throw this away. dont keep reading it over and over, or the feeling will linger.

Posted 8 Years Ago


aww.I have felt like this before also *hugs*

Posted 8 Years Ago


great poetry wonderful work i loved it thanks for sharing this with me

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not being stupid at all. The pain you feel is wonderfully expressed. People assume we've all been through pain before but I doubt its the same for any two people. Everyone hurts differently.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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AchingAlexandra
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I'm a really nice person, but I have a lot of issues. I love writing, it helps ebb the regular pain I have. First name: Courtney Middle Name: Alexandra I'm purely myself. I don't change to fit.. more..

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