Why me ?

Why me ?

A Poem by AchingAlexandra
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My heart hurts , and I've been crying for close to 24 hours . I fear I'll never get better .

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How can one person ,
Be in so much pain ,
yet continue to live ?

How can one heart ,
receive so much pain ,
and yet continue to beat ?

How do two people ,
become so close ,
then feel like strangers ?

How can my heart ,
feel so broken ,
and yet continue to love ?

How can two eyes ,
cry so much ,
and yet still have tears to shed ?

How can My eyes ,
Continue to cry ,
and yet , no one notices ?

How come he knows ,
the pain I'm on now ,
and not try to fix it ?

Why did he do this to me ?

It hurts to breath ,
it hurts to live ,
it hurts to love ,
it hurts more to stop .

How is it possible ,
that I feel so awful ,
my chest hurts so much ,
and yet they say I'll be okay ?

How can no one see how hurt I am ?

How can no one know how badly I hurt ?

How come no one wants to fix my shattered heart ?

© 2012 AchingAlexandra


Author's Note

AchingAlexandra
Just how I feel right now . I really needed to get it out . Feel free to tell me how stupid I'm being and so on .

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Very relatable. And you're not being stupid at all, just a little..dramatic. The feeling you described it spot on, and exactly how I feel most of the time. It's very well written and has a lot of emotion.

A bit of advice though, after you let all these feelings out; throw this away. dont keep reading it over and over, or the feeling will linger.

Posted 12 Years Ago


aww.I have felt like this before also *hugs*

Posted 12 Years Ago


great poetry wonderful work i loved it thanks for sharing this with me

Posted 12 Years Ago


Not being stupid at all. The pain you feel is wonderfully expressed. People assume we've all been through pain before but I doubt its the same for any two people. Everyone hurts differently.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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AchingAlexandra
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I'm a really nice person, but I have a lot of issues. I love writing, it helps ebb the regular pain I have. First name: Courtney Middle Name: Alexandra I'm purely myself. I don't change to fit.. more..

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