Darkness

New poem that just "Popped" into my head. :P Kinda emo, so beware.

Darkness

In the darkest part of your heart,
lies something you can never part,
It listens to the voices of hate,
ever more, in its vengence it wants to take.
It longs for a chance, in which the light is dim,
so it will take that dim, and make it sin.
It will burst forth like black fire,
comsuming all that is in its mire.
This thing, this sin, it existes within,
It is part of us all, it is part of us now.
This thing, this shadow,
It is our soul, our moon.
It is Darkness

Reviews

[Sheila Marie Carr]

I love dark poetry and you did a really good job expressing yourself here, I loved the flow you have going through this write...great job

[Sseoni]

What an awesome poem! It was wonderfully emotional and brilliant! I loved it! :D

[SilentDreamer]

I like this. As jemane said it is honest and true. Flows very well, not to mention full of emotion. Great job. Keep writing. :D

[Jenny Nelson]

Honest. I kinda find that the writings that just pop into someone's head tend to be pretty doggone good, just as this one is. Nice job.