Just Like Rain

Just Like Rain

A Poem by Obscured by the Shadows

I lay here crying, 

letting out my pain.

Now my tears are falling,

just like rain.

 

My life's a mess,

a horror story.

Though I must confess,

you won't feel sorry.

 

I was the cause,

for all this pain.

It gave me pause,

with nothing to gain.

 

I lost it all,

before it even started.

I thought I'd grow tall,

but now I'm broken-hearted.

 

I lay here crying, 

letting out my pain.

Now my blood is falling,

just like rain.

© 2016 Obscured by the Shadows


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This is just amazing. Extremely relatable to anyone who has ever been hurt over their own actions(so probably everyone). It reminds me of someone I lost because I decided to be stupid. You captured the thoughts of someone who has lost something dear to them because of thereself. Great job :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading this :)



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This is just amazing. Extremely relatable to anyone who has ever been hurt over their own actions(so probably everyone). It reminds me of someone I lost because I decided to be stupid. You captured the thoughts of someone who has lost something dear to them because of thereself. Great job :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading this :)
this is amazing, i love this. "I lay here crying,
letting out my pain.
Now my tears are falling,
just like rain." this is me right now

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

It's been me for a while now.. how hard it is to change.
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

4 Years Ago

yeah, it is
A really emotional piece. I'm not much of a critic, but nice work, I felt the emotions you poured into this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*holds breath the entire time i'm reading this* This is really amazing. One of those tear-inducing pieces that I personally love. The more intense, the better, and I'm loving this. It's so intense, and yet it has a somber feel to it as well. It's as if the person going through this experience has accepted that their pain is real, but as bad as it may be they contributed to it in a way they didn't see before. I'm not sure any of what I just said makes any sense. xD I'm super tired tbh.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

Oh, princess. Thank you for going through and reading this. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Rye
such an emotional read, I can feel sorrow in this. Well expressed emotions.

Posted 4 Years Ago


It might seem weird but i always find inspiration in sad writings, they always show me honesty and the most tragic situations of human life and how people still have the courage to keep going and fighting for the circumstances to change.....Love it frnd....The title is quite brilliant.....Clappings!!!!! Full ratings.....

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

You have no responsibilities to me!
Inject Positivity

4 Years Ago

Its my frndship's responsibility to keep you safe and better and help you whatever way possible....... read more
Obscured by the Shadows

4 Years Ago

Oh my... I don't know why I didn't see this earlier, but... Thank you so much
Great flow, I like the feeling this gives off

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes we have to feel our way through to get to the next step. Feeling pain is part of healing.
Very good poem with lots of emotion. We have all felt this kind of pain at some point in our lives.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Drowning in feels.... dude, this is awesome. Well the situation sucks, so it isn't awesome, but the poem is truthful................ if that's the truth. Or it's not hiding what's happening??? It's being open. That's what I'm looking for. It's an open poem. I love your writing! Hope you don't stop.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is as sad as ever to read. I feel this one.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 18, 2015
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Obscured by the Shadows

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