Crave

Your addiction is not a crime

We all Crave

but do you let it define how you behave

Hurting those you love

as you fall like a wounded dove

There is no easy way out

but do not pout

As you begin to fade away

We all wish you would just stay

The darkness still settles in

yet you have committed no sin

But you begin to cry

when you can no longer see the sky

Don't you worry little one

For we all Crave

Author's Note

I am aware that the last to lines do not rhyme but to me they just sounded right to be put like that.

Reviews

[Not here]

i really like the rhymes in this, and its fine the last two dont. good way to wrap it up. great job :)

[Emily]

'when you can no longer see the sky'

Just something about this line that I love!
Keep on writing!

[Shadowkai]

I won't ever stop

[Living_Shadowz]

Also you don't have to rhyme in a poem just make it sound emotional with cool words

[Living_Shadowz]

Lol the first sentence is "we all carve" instead of "we all crave"

[Shadowkai]

Whoops thank you

[Living_Shadowz]

No problem