Heart's beat

Her heart brought him back, the true love!

"I love you but how can I tell you? I don't have anything to give you not even love." She shouted inside seeing him going. "I want to tell you that You are my heart, you already have my love now there's nothing left with me to give you. Is my heart going away?" 

He turned away, coming, "There is nothing stopping the beat to come back to the heart.The heart is nothing without its beat. I will be always with you, with my beat."

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Beautiful idea, good execution. The dialogues could have been better punctuated and clear. It was a rather good write and read.

Love,
Vasilees.

[Shasha]

Yes, it could be a little more clear but I was not able to think of any other better lines, that's why. Thank you Vasilees,Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I am glad that other than you liked it.