The Page
A Poem by
Shasha
Lets tear off the page,
The scribbled one,
Covered with the colours,
Which we painted together.
Lets tear off the page,
The one with the memories,
The one with the love,
The one with our drawings.
Lets tear off the page,
Which carried our words,
Because it's old now,
We got a new one to start.
© 2017 Shasha
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Author's Note
Hey! thank you very much for reading, please let me know how's it!
Reviews
Great logic in the below words.
"Lets tear off the page,
Which carried our words,
Because it's old now,
We got a new one to start."
Hard to forget things. But we must and begin again. Thank you Shasha for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
So true, but we must and begin again.
Thank you!
:D
5 Years Ago
You are welcome Shasha.
Great job! By the way, it's not necessary to put commas at the end of each line. Just put them where they're required. Beside that, this is awesome:)
Posted 6 Years Ago
Great job! By the way, it's not necessary to put commas at the end of each line. Just put them where they're required. Beside that, this is awesome:)
6 Years Ago
Oh, all right!
Thank you very much Ethan for your kind review!
Yep, plenty more pebbles on the old beach of love. As one door closes..
Nice Shasha
Posted 6 Years Ago
Yep, plenty more pebbles on the old beach of love. As one door closes..
Nice Shasha
6 Years Ago
Yes, thank you Gee, glad that you liked it!!!
One day, one emotion, one life stanza at at time ... strong and poignant write - well done!
Posted 6 Years Ago
One day, one emotion, one life stanza at at time ... strong and poignant write - well done!
6 Years Ago
Oh, thank you very much!!! You made my day!!!
Tear my off a piece of the emotions used to write this splendidly profound inspiration... Nicely penned...
Posted 6 Years Ago
Tear my off a piece of the emotions used to write this splendidly profound inspiration... Nicely penned...
6 Years Ago
Oh, thank you very much Silente, I am glad to listen this from you!!! Thank you!!!
6 Years Ago
You are most welcome, Shasha...
Out with the old. She's gone.
In with the new. Blond one.
Require big fridge magnet now.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Out with the old. She's gone.
In with the new. Blond one.
Require big fridge magnet now.
6 Years Ago
Ha! A big one! But that's not my experience, I stay away from it! It is one of my friends. Thank you.. read more Ha! A big one! But that's not my experience, I stay away from it! It is one of my friends. Thank you!!!
:-)
Yaasss...tear off the page...of memories...and hang it on the fridge until the new is done. This was imaginative and compact, both hard to do but you did.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Yaasss...tear off the page...of memories...and hang it on the fridge until the new is done. This was imaginative and compact, both hard to do but you did.
6 Years Ago
Yeh! Thank you very, very much, I am pleased that you liked it! You are amazing!
It's kinda sad... maybe u can add something about saving the torn pages??
Posted 6 Years Ago
It's kinda sad... maybe u can add something about saving the torn pages??
6 Years Ago
Maybe, But I think it's good this way.
Thank you very much Siya for reading and reviewing!
6 Years Ago
It is definitely AWESOME!! Ur welcome!! :)
6 Years Ago
Thank you, but maybe you are right, I can think of a better one, thank you for your suggestion!
6 Years Ago
Happy to help!!
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Shasha Where there are many voices but one sound, the country of love, India
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