Sun Struggle

Come out Sun with your rays so warm
Upon skin longing to feel
Once again heat after you were hidden
In winter clouds of dark
Cover that would not show
The beauty of your brightness
Come out old wise one and show
Your face upon pale skin
That longs heartily to see
Your appearance come behind the clouds

2010

Reviews

[lightsong]

You see :>

We always look at the sun as this majestic invincible thing, but here it feels as You are encouraging her to wake up from her weakness, to shine bright again, as if You become her and she becomes You, leaning on each others, You get strength from her and she from You, and what a wonderful idea and feeling is this to be my dear✨🌞😊

[William Michael Reeves]

Sharon is and has been a powerful sun of strength for so many. This was just what I was telling her about you. Your words bring light and song. I've read your poetry to her these last couple months and now to hear from you. Sharon communicated life!! Thank you

[lightsong]

You two keep being LIVING "Suns" and it's an order ;>

[Einstein Noodle]

i live in Arkansas .. in the Ozark Mountains .. it has been unusually cold the last couple weeks and i feel every bit of this poems longing for the warmth .. i think this line is brilliant! "Come out old wise one and show" .. such an intimate relationship with ol' Sol says i!
E.

[M. J. Smith]

You read my mind! Winter seems forever. Cold feels eternal. And yet, the sun steadily returns, days growing longer. Soon the crocus will raise its head. Until then, I wait. Soon enough, the sun will warm my poor bones. Already, faint goose calls hint of trails still to be explored.
Love the joy here. Bright words or a dark winter day. A wonderful call to Spring.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Beautiful, is there anything better than the warmth of the sun shining through our windows. Hang on Spring is on it's way.

[William Michael Reeves]

Sharing these reviews with her has added warmth like you can't believe. Her pastor came today and I was able to share this with both of them as part of prayer. It was amazing Cherrie!. And I was able to show her her profile and that she made it to one of the top writers already. It really meant a lot to her. Tomorrow family is coming and they will be so happy. Thank you!

[Cherrie Palmer]

That is truly wonderful. I cannot wait to hear how that goes.