Abandonment

Someone help

Hear my cries

See through the yelps

No one ever tries

Please don't abandon me

Like the rest

Hug me, love me

Tell i'm at my best

If i cry harder

If i feel weaker

Be my guarder

Be the seeker

Of my happiness

That slowly got lost

Because of the abandoness

I guess it was the cost

I wish it was still happy

But that's gone too

Instead it turned crappy

But don't worry, It wasn't just you

It was also them

No one ever bothered

So it turned to mayhem

and that's when I got battered

With the sadness

So it turned to depression

I guess it was the poor spiritedness

That turned cutting into an addiction

So please don't leave me 

Like the rest

Stay with me

Even after my best

If you do

I promise not to leave

I swear I'll love you

and together, If we believe

We will stay friends forever

Even after life

And nothing will tear us apart, nothing whatsoever

Even if your a lowlife

So please say yes

I promise I won't go away

Even if your a mess

So what do you say?

Author's Note

it took me forever to write this i didn't know how to put my thoughts into words.... I've been feeling lonely lately.....

Reviews

[Jessiee]

realllyy goood i love sad poems they show a lot of emotion, and many people can relate :). overall very sad but awesome write :)

[SamBug]

This was sad but so powerful. Full of amazing emotion

[Silent Knight]

Aw. Such sad emotion from this poem I like the wording and rhyming. And it has a good flow two. cheer up! Be happeh.

[WynterPhoenix]

An amazing write Brooke. And remember, you are never alone.