The Dancing Colours

A peom written for entry in the contest 'For the Seasons' by Therene. :)

All around, the trees are laced with hues of yellows and oranges

Livid red leaves catch my eyes more than others

The occaisional serene, malachite colour standing out among the more radiant

The autumnal rainbow that comes every year

 

The air is sweet, with the scent of new grass and blooming flowers

Warm nights, and pleasant days

I relish the warm touch of the sun against my skin

My heart touched by the springfelt nature

 

An alabaster wonderland encompassing my line of sight

The ground and trees laced with snow

And light, that glimmers through the frosted tree branches

In a humble display of winteresque ambiance

 

Finally, after being deprived of the sun's warmth

The air is sweet once more, and I shed my thick coat

I inhale the stunning sights around me

And delve into the summery heaven

Author's Note

Please note that I'm only fourteen, and I don't have as wide a vocabulary or imagination as most. Please don't criticize too harshly.

Reviews

[0_o Abbie]

Oh and I loved it btw. :D

[0_o Abbie]

With words like alabaster, wonderland, encompassing, winteresque, ambiance, radiant, and autumnal I don't think anyone will be questioning your vocabulary. And your usage of these words shows you have imagination too. So don't be too hard on yourself.

[star-crossed]

wow , this was really good. im only 12, 13 in 2 days , so i understand. good job tho.