Katherine wheels of the soul

My mind spins

Rotating

Pirouetting

Round and round

 

Eyes blurring

Senses deafening

Heart pounds

My chest gets tight

 

Fingers tingling

A dull sensation

Nerves congealing

I must start to fight

 

I've lost control

I'm falling

Plummeting

Down into loves cavern

 

You make me lose control

My heart pounds

And my soul spins

Like a Katherine Wheel

Reviews

[M.Babu]

What a descriptive piece this was my friend!

Nicely done:

"My mind spins
Rotating
Pirouetting
Round and round"

Magnificent!

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A intensely dizzying array of emotions and imagery.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very intense, not sure i understand this one though.

[Lily Mae]

I could really feel this write.. You've done a great job in expressing these emotions. :)x

[☯]

I loved how this small poem is so simple, but so capturing. All in a sequence of your soul spinning, and the imagery I had in my mind fit perfectly. Very nice job :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A widened view of morality, simple and plain to the point of perfection, well done