Sometimes....We Just Live

Sometimes....We Just Live

A Poem by Shivam Murari
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This is a poem dealing with the constant heartbreak-move-on nature of the present era. The various points of this phase has been depicted in the poem.

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I've been thinking for some time 

Sitting here and remembering words that rhyme 
Poem and songs take the stress away 
And if u write them yourself they are drowned in bay. 

People come and people go 
We get up, get sad and cry, oh! 
Then we remember the beautiful times we had 
We think we have lost our clad 
Experiences only teach us and show we are stronger than this 
But we are always stuck thinking "Why only I was chosen for this?" 
Everyone has pain, some have more , some have less. 
We keep wondering, "why the irregularity?"
And then somehow we forgive 
Sometimes...We Just Live. 

Similar things happened to me again and again 
I kept wondering why I put my life in drain 
People came to me, but all they did was betray
Others came and held me and made the thoughts sway 
With time they left too 
Every time I knew, I just knew. 
I get mixed with emotions of rage, betrayal and revenge 
But then I knew I couldn't avenge 
I am not made for this, I am meant to just give 
Sometimes....We Just Live

© 2013 Shivam Murari


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Shivam Murari
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Nature never deceives us; it is always we who deceive ourselves...then there wont be any friend or foe...
so emotional and heart touching.It talks about siting alone watching a bay pouring the sad and pleased memories into it ...few people come and go like a wind....awesome poetry.yea it made an effect indeed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

7 Years Ago

Thankyou so much! :)



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Nature never deceives us; it is always we who deceive ourselves...then there wont be any friend or foe...
so emotional and heart touching.It talks about siting alone watching a bay pouring the sad and pleased memories into it ...few people come and go like a wind....awesome poetry.yea it made an effect indeed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

7 Years Ago

Thankyou so much! :)
It ends in a compromise... :(

And that it seems as that God has so less to give... We've gotta work our own ways ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

8 Years Ago

Indeed, we do! Thanks for coming :)
very well written , we should all just appreciate the beautiful aesthetic of life itself instead of questioning each unfortunate event

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

8 Years Ago

Hey thanks so much :)
Betrayal really hurts and hurts us deep .One cannot come to terms with it.But you have reconciled to this fact in your life '"But then I knew.........we just give"- as most people do because they cannot avenge themselves and have to continue living. Good write !!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing, friend :)
this was really wonderful..!!!
a strong optimistic approach towards life....!!!!
well done..!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

8 Years Ago

you are highly welcomed..!!!
i reviewed it only once, but due to some problem,the system hange.. read more
Shivam Murari

8 Years Ago

:P I was just kidding :P
Saumya

8 Years Ago

:)
this was really wonderful..!!!
a strong optimistic approach towards life....!!!!
well done..!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was really wonderful..!!!
a strong optimistic approach towards life....!!!!
well done..!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem reflects how a person sits in thought and the thoughts that come to mind. I love the title. Enjoyed reading!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

8 Years Ago

Thats exactly how it was written. It was automatic. I sat to think and it occurred instantly. Thanks.. read more
absolutely... it ws a cmpllin read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Zelle :-)
Zelle

8 Years Ago

the pleasure was all mine! :)
Yes, it did make a positive effect on me to remember to encourage, and uplift others, and to allow them to trust me as betrayal hurts so very much!
Your message is clear, and strikes a chord for others to remember how lonely life may be so they may be better friends one to the other!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much fine lady. Your stopping by and reviewing my poem is highly appreciated :)

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Tags: Confusion, Dilemma, Experiences, Betrayals, Loneliness, Support
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Shivam Murari is a student, currently aspiring to get into a good college. He loves to write poems, loads of them. He usually gets very random ideas, which he thinks are pretty cool, and in the proces.. more..

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