DEAR BEST FRIEND

DEAR BEST FRIEND

A Poem by Shivam Murari
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A letter to the best friend like none other

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Dear Best Friend

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Date : Whenever You Read It.

Dear Best Friend,
How have you been?
I hope you're doing fine.
Haven't heard from you since.

I've been going down
That ol' memory lane.
Thinking about how
All of it began.

No. Neither to our friendship,
Nor to our spot-tree.
But to the knife,
That you used to stab me.

Pushing me down
Was your dire necessity.
To cover your own flaws,
Draw curtains over insecurity.

You mocked at my condition,
My diligence, my tireless run.
Spread your venom of lies
Filled the ears of my loved ones.

Naïve as I was,
I befriended you in every phase.
Unaware of the dark vile,
That hid behind your white face.

While I pulled you out of
The vicious death well,
You pushed me down the same.
Reciprocated so well!

You feigned guilty face,
Every time you were in need.
But band aids don't fix bullet holes
Here's a rant of your deed.


RAP verse

You talk that talk behind my back
I dare you now, look into my eyes
Now speak again, lemme hear you splash
Can't speak a word? Ran out of lies?
Or is it your dumb inferiority
Matching up to your insecurity
Imma let you speak, but you're empty
Better yet than your fake charity
Now listen up d****e, hold yourself back
Get your issues towed up in a line
Did you lose the count? Couldn't even start?
My dear best friend now pay the fine.


So here's to burst your bubbles

You pulled the rug out beneath my feet
Thinking that I might fall.
Let me tell you, though unsuspecting,
I jumped before your call.

So goodbye.
Fare well.
Wish you all the luck.
And to your future victims too.

Regards!

Your non-victimized best friend
Shivam Murari.




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© 2015 Shivam Murari


Author's Note

Shivam Murari
First of all a BIG SHOUTOUT to Taylor Swift whose chart topping song Bad Blood helped me in my tough times. I hope you all like my way of reciprocating to my "best friend's" actions and relate to it.

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Is it bad that when the rap verse came up Eminem's voice read it in my head? The rest of it sounded a lot like Taylor Swift. I like this, and her song is awesome.
I can relate, there are a lot of false "friends" out there, I've had a few.
The title made me think this would some sappy, sweet thing about a perfect friendship.
I like how it turned out way better.
Nice write! Well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

5 Years Ago

It's perfect that it did. I had Eminem's voice in my head when I wrote the RAP verse and obviously b.. read more
Bluefire

5 Years Ago

No problem, I'm glad I turned out how you intended. I wish Eminem and Taylor Swift would do a duet, .. read more
Shivam Murari

5 Years Ago

Yes that surely would be awesome. Till then, lets just enjoy fan made collabs. :)



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WOW!! This is so very good. I enjoyed reading your write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is modern and cool, but never superficial, a nice mix of styles. Well done !

Posted 5 Years Ago


an eclectic mix of a poetic letter to a friend, spiced with angst and set off with a little rap break. This would be interesting read aloud. Well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


With friends like that you won't need enemies. A nice response ... when responses are composed.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very nice poetry. Artwork and set-up. A entertaining ride in the poetry. You had a bit of everything in the words. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Shivam Murari

5 Years Ago

: )
Is it bad that when the rap verse came up Eminem's voice read it in my head? The rest of it sounded a lot like Taylor Swift. I like this, and her song is awesome.
I can relate, there are a lot of false "friends" out there, I've had a few.
The title made me think this would some sappy, sweet thing about a perfect friendship.
I like how it turned out way better.
Nice write! Well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shivam Murari

5 Years Ago

It's perfect that it did. I had Eminem's voice in my head when I wrote the RAP verse and obviously b.. read more
Bluefire

5 Years Ago

No problem, I'm glad I turned out how you intended. I wish Eminem and Taylor Swift would do a duet, .. read more
Shivam Murari

5 Years Ago

Yes that surely would be awesome. Till then, lets just enjoy fan made collabs. :)

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Shivam Murari is a student, currently aspiring to get into a good college. He loves to write poems, loads of them. He usually gets very random ideas, which he thinks are pretty cool, and in the proces.. more..

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