A dusky light..

went astray on my thoughts.. I feel asleep .. why it's so dark !

A dusky light

I am lost in the blue 

So dark! that I can’t find a clue..

I feel my warm tears falling so hard, wandering away

Yes, maybe it has the same color as that huge ocean’s drops of water.. 

painful but somehow beautiful, Nah?

No, I think that I am the only one who is able to see that dusky light shining on them.. 

Don’t you see it ? I ask 

But no ear would hear my voice!

How hard it is being ununderstandable..
Vague and ambiguous like a faint star

Laughing, smiling, but that awful feeling somewhere inside won't stop burning you down

I want to talk, to say it out loud, but it's been a fright, a habit..

No one would like to hear, no one would see those low lights escaping from my eyes !

I'm used to..

Didn't you recognize that I rarely tell my own fears, my own sadness?

yeah..

It's not about not having some, but I just end up talking about my family's, my Friend's, my colleague's ones !

You know why?

It's not interesting..

It's been so disgusting..

So, will I scream? It's okey, no one would hear..

No, I just have no power to shout it out loud and make it seems clear !

Let it mixes up with that flow !

Let it go astray to nowhere

Following the ocean, the sound of waves, to a place with no ambition

Give a sigh and let it be as it used to be 

It's okey, whispering to that light

"Let's turn it up to a wonderful story. let's be friends"

Reviews

[SSKaitlyn]

The poem reads like a story, and that's amazing. The imagery is on point, and I applaud the vocabulary. Perhaps though, the flow is a little off to me, with the long sentence. Maybe I read it at the wrong pace, but that's just me. You should still be proud. It's a pretty piece.

[A daytime shooting star]

oh !! thanks a lot, it's a great thing to know that you've liked it ^^
yup, after all reading it and listening to it is quiet different. But the most important is that you've got the feelings I made on writing it.
I am so thankful again

[Black Jess]

Well you've got my reaction '' en live '' xD. It's Pretty awesome !

[Weeping willow]

Good write as I fell into the words of emotions that filled the lines;-]

[A daytime shooting star]

Aah I am so thankful, I really do value your words
Thanks a lot again ^^