Thoughts Never Spoken

A life not worth fighting for, but a decision that could change everything.

The rocks crumbled and fell, unable to tell I ran to the edge

thinking and feeling... seeing and being, someone im not.
A thoughtless mind told to visit a world unkind, uninteresting, and so... unavoidable I stood, breathing everything in as much as I could. The sea, the cliff, the edge
and my next move.

I took a visit to a country I had not known, somewhere where my thoughts could be alone...

Discovering another part of myself, someone else.
A life became brighter, better.
 A life spoke volumes and pronouced every letter of my absence, to you.

Years past and without contact from my old life, I developed a relationship with the moment.

Although I have not yet told you where I am, the wind will hopefully whisp, dance and present my new character, my new passion
back to you.


For i am sorry, for my silence.
But love knows no frequency, so i will use my existence to speak in your unanswered dreams.
                     and i 'am' sorry... for my slience.

Author's Note

Your thoughts? I really dont know what to think of it.

Reviews

[SheActsLikeSummer]

This was really good. I thoroughly enjoyed it. But I thought in places, you were a bit to forward with what you were saying. It's all very well written, but some details could be taken out, like the 'four years'. You could say 'For years' instead, having the exact number somehow takes away from the emotion. Poetry isn't for facts, it's for meaning. Anyway, I really, really enjoyed it. Sorry if I was being a bit harsh :P

[lalala]

i too enjoyed this poem. yu are very creative nd have a special talent. keep it up.

[BLACK PRINCE]

' I have developed a relationship with the moment'

There is something humble yet sad, about this line.
It could refer to solitude or contentment of simply being,
in that simple joy of living.

[cartera]

A poem within a poem. Interesting structure. Love as many forms and does pass us on from place to place: someintes dangerous, sometimes quiet and often breathtakingly dangerous. It certainly 'knows no frequency'. The poem is mass of sad sorrowful feeling.
ATB
Alex.

[rivers]

Discovering another part of myself, someone else.
A life became brighter, better.
A life spoke volumes and pronouced every letter of my absence, to you."

" I developed a relationship with the moment."

The writing will mean many different things to each reader...The author likely has much thought between the lines...I isolate these lines because for me growth into the moment is the key to understanding the journey taken...I read this 3 times because I felt different emotions each time...

[marytownsend]

"So i will use my existence to speak in your unanswered dreams..." Beautiful and profound! Love this one, it speaks volumes!

[Fading Poetic]

There is a strong emotional pull to this work that I felt within the first couple of times that greatly impressed me and made me continue to read on and again a second time. This work has more that I can personally relate to than some others I have read. I'll be adding it to my library to read again later.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

This is a very good piece. I like how it can be interpreted differnetly in different people. I personally think that's the best kind of poem, because that way everyone kind of gets their own poem. Excellent.

[Kenneth Compton]

Disconnection, whether from people we've known, lovers, or the world in general, is a hard and complex state. you convey this well with both your words as well as the disjointed style. Very promising write my dear. I look forward to sampling more of your work!

[Donald Meikle]

love the contrast but is passed really past?

[Distant horizons]

I think this is beautifully done. A relationship with the moment... Perfect.