Him

I like a guy right, well I can't tell him I like him so I wrote how I felt(unfortunately for me he still doesn't know)

Have you ever wanted to tell someone,

you like,

or even more,

love them?

Have you ever wondered,

If they,

love you too?

I understand I may be young,

But there is one thing,

That I will say,

I love him now, 

And I love him today.

Reviews

[JenLyn]

It's cute and it rhymes but it's a little too typical for me, but you know you can write so don't take it the wrong way, it's just not my favorite piece by you. Keep writing though because you know I love to read your work. :)

[Ethan Paz]

Good poem but you should take out this part, "I understand I may be young,"
You don't have to if you don't want to but it's a good idea. Good job! Great talent you have!

[Moth Phoenix]

I can relate!!!! You're a great writer sweetie!! Keep it up!!!