Today

Today

A Chapter by Joy Lynn B.
"

I had a dream and I wanted to share it! =)

"
Today, 
I saw you,
for the first time in my life,
You're beautiful,
cute,
funny,
everything any girl would want,
We talked,
and laughed,
we talked for hours,
But it only felt like a second,
you made me blush,
then we laughed again,
you remind me of what we could be,
I go on a journey,
as I look in those beautiful dark brown eyes,
That could hypnotize anyone,
I close my eyes,
You're there,
I make a wish,
But it has already came true,
I fall asleep,
I still feel your presence,
Love,
a four letter word,
that is heard a lot,
when is it true they ask,
when is it truthfully coming from they heart,
Is when you wish,
With all your heart,
That the time spent together,
Will never end,
Like a song,
played over and over,
because you love it so much,
You are my knight,
and I'm the princess,
Thanking you,
For saving my life,
from heart brake and torture,
and seal it,
with a kiss.


© 2010 Joy Lynn B.


My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Reviews

The other way around my bad!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yeah come was suppose to be came! lol thanks for pointing that out!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cheesy choice of favourite on my part, but I liked the line 'You are my knight, / and I'm the princess, / Thanking you, / For saving my life,' because the oldies are the goldies. ^_^
[I'm wondering, was 'has already came true' meant to be 'has already come true'??]


Posted 14 Years Ago


Very cute and the flow was nice there was a spelling error "brake" should be "break" but it's just a typo everyone makes those mistakes. These are my favorite lines, as I look in those beautiful dark brown eyes,
That could hypnotize anyone,
I close my eyes,
You're there,
I make a wish,
But it has already came true, I just love the way they sound and flow. Overall a great write, keep it up! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

90 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 9, 2010
Last Updated on April 9, 2010


Author

Joy Lynn B.
Joy Lynn B.

Somewhere, FL, United States Minor Outlying Islands



About
So, ya my name is already given, if you haven't read it then it's Joy Lynn B.! I love writing poetry and writing songs for me to sing! To bad for me I have to buy music to go with it..... so that make.. more..

Writing