Love Handles

There’s no

Love handles on my

Tummy,

So you

Can never control,

Let alone,

Have a hold on

Me.

Can you wrap your

Mind around it if

It asked for a

Hug?

Maybe or

Maybe not?

Reviews

[jeannemarie coulter]

i do not want to catch and hold you...that would trap you in a stillness of things unquestioned...i like that your soul questions your mind grows while you dance with curiosity, and i would hug you for an instant simply because we are alive and hugs are priceless gifts...

[sinNsincerity]

Hugs are amazing, totally underrated, and are priceless!
I'm always questioning everything no matter how strong my faith is in God and Jesus Christ.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like those love handles on the woman. Need something to keep us warm on the cold nights of Winter. I like the poetry. Left something for the reader to think about.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Love me some love handles haha

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too. Need something to hold on to.

[Ana B.]

A hug will always make it better. A wonderful write dear SiS :)

[sinNsincerity]

It most definitely will. Thank you so much Ana! It is always a pleasure to hear from you.

[Ana B.]

My pleasure dear friend ;)

[Rana]

That's one cute pun there. Then there's much beauty in the way the first question has been put. It was like the words were juggling with tangible and intangible things. 'wrap your mind' used quite wittily. Loved this piece.

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you Rana!
I put a lot of thought into the way I wrote this, so I'm really glad you see the beauty in it!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

There's nothing wrong with love handles, I guess (having them of course). Cute poem, Sin in Sincerety. :) Rudi

[sinNsincerity]

Nothing wrong with them at all hehe
I just used it to be sarcastic...
Thank you for reading!

[Willard Wells]

I only want love from one that does not need to be held to keep. Very interesting piece. Good questions.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Willard!

[sereenaoutloud]

No one should want to control you, love is extra wings to fly and a soft place to land not control!
But hugs...oh who doesnt love hugs!!
>HUGS BESTIE < hhehhehehe

[sinNsincerity]

Very true BESTIE!!!! HUGS on the HOUSE for everyone!

[sereenaoutloud]

LOL..happy hour :)

[sinNsincerity]

Yep, happy hour for 24 hrs!

[sereenaoutloud]

Lmso... ok 24 hours of free hugs... starting.....NOW

[sinNsincerity]

'Till infinity!

[sereenaoutloud]

AWWWWWWWW :)

[Saddam]

It asked for a
Hug?

Maybe or
Maybe not?

Always there be confusion if the love is not pure.
Fantastic write friend.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Saddam!

[Saddam]

Most welcome friend.

[wordman]

hell does a woman need love handles to controll you lol

[sinNsincerity]

I can never be controlled, but I can surrender myself...

[Stephen Scaggs]

I noticed a small typo on line number 9, "you" should be "your". I like the personification of using love handles as imagery for not being able to grasp what's right in front of you. I also think the word "tummy" introduces something somewhat comic (?) in line number 3, but that might just be me. I would just use the full word "stomach." I'm also not sure of the lines: "Can you wrap you // Mind around it if // It asked for a // Hug?" Was that a jab at being provocative, I'm guessing? Perhaps I'm just looking at it from the wrong angle. Also, thanks again for asking me to review!

Rating: 8.5/10.

[sinNsincerity]

It can mean what ever it makes you feel or think.
For me, When I pose the question, I'm asking if you can understand the message if it slapped you in the face...