Dreams, Decision, and Deliverance

Love only exist by freedom of choice…

You can say yes and you can also

Say no.

Crisis of diet,

Crisis of dreams,

And crisis of deliverance.

I’m naturally taking in less for myself,

So I can take care of others.

The crisis of Christ!

I’m in my mid twenties and I’m

Exiled by the hearts I wish to love.

Stressing,

Why?

Because the closer I get to God,

Life is getting harder!

Falling on my face some days,

Trying not to be afraid.

Desperately needing change!

Warfare praying!

There’s an enemy spiritually out to derail my purpose.

Not ceasing because I’ll go on forever!

A champion I am.

Advancing to a new beginning.

Not winning,

But I can lose!

I can lose my faith,

So I constantly pray.

Asking for something major,

To save the world!

Hoping he’s hearing me immediately,

Hoping he responds accordingly!

Angels bring Gods answers…

We all don’t get Gabriel,

But we still get angels in need.

So I will pray on my knees until the entire

World prays for the same thing.

Saving you is saving me,

Loving you is loving me!

Reviews

[Isabel25]

"Exiled by hearts I wish to love"- I love that line very much Sin .

Iam more of a spiritual person myself and I usually never pray for myself. I believe god would provide for me according to my actions. But I do pray for the ones I love. The last two lines of this poem are so meaningful and so true. Never lose faith my friend.

[sinNsincerity]

Likewise! I also believe that If I take care of others and love them no matter the circumstances God will always take care of me.
Thank you for spending the time to read this and leaving me a sweet note!

[Isabel25]

Always happy to Sin ;)

[sereenaoutloud]

wow, this is powerful and so very true, "do unto others as you would have them do unto you" Great piece Sweet Sin!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sereena

[nazia]

This is so intriguing David. What a thoughtful thing to write. Loved the expression of it. Extremely well written :)
Hats off to you for creating such a masterpiece..

[sinNsincerity]

Always a pleasure to hear how you feel about my writing Nazia.
I'm thankful and I appreciate you for always telling me what you think.

[nazia]

The pleasure is all mine David. Its always a joy to read your work :)

[Einahpets2012]

Tears are running down my face.. this is truly beautiful and in a way I connect with it. I love it!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm more that happy that you can relate and make an connection with it.
Thank for reading and leaving a not.

[jeannemarie coulter]

So I will pray on my knees until the entire

World prays for the same thing.

Saving you is saving me,

Loving you is loving me!


very moving and thought provoking words...well penned as a whole...thank you

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Jeanne Marie! Always appreciated!

[TheOne&Only]

((APPLAUSE))...Love it!! :) Thanks for sharing.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading. Always a pleasure and always appreciated!

[Ruth]

Ah, hell of a discovery to know the closer we become to being who we should be, the more life ups the challenges and change of perception, poignant write :)

[sinNsincerity]

Yes mam! I'm just trying to raise the bar; rather than, limboing.
Thank you for reading and leaving a note Ruth!
have a great day!

[Ruth]

You too hon, most welcome :)

[Jamestown]

Absolutely fantastic my friend!
This is definitely going to my favorites:)
You hit on several points that are spot on and very
exciting to read, 1-constant prayer, 2-growing closer to God
3-warfare to name a few, you always put great work out and
I have a few already shelved but this will be my new favorite
for now:) Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry, b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you brother James! You know where I stand and I just want the whole world to see it!
Stay blessed! 123

[Jamestown]

Praise Jesus! We are called to be fishers of men, keep reeling them in my brother
glory be to God!

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Two corrections:
Love only "exists" by freedom of choice…
Angels bring "God's" answers…
Also, I would capitalize "he" when you are speaking of God. But that is up to you!

"So I will pray on my knees until the entire
World prays for the same thing.
Saving you is saving me,
Loving you is loving me!"
Those are very powerful lines. Many wise sages speak of this, that we are all interconnected and that if we hurt someone else, we are hurting ourselves and vice versa. So isn't it much easier to love one another? You would think that yes! But not everyone is advanced as you spiritually and they choose to remain in ignorance, in ego-driven feelings and desires. You are striving for a wise and loving cause. Keep at it. It is a lonely journey, but there are others wishing for the same kind of love. Just know that, so you don't feel so alone anymore.

[sinNsincerity]

Oh thank You Nadia! I wish it were so easy, but it takes baby steps and I welcome the Journey. The good, bad , and the ugly. There's no other way to go but to love and smile for people when you know how bad or hard life can be. I just want to be there for others if they call on me or not.

[wordman]

well my friend I hope you get an answer soon
to stop the pain I think half the world is going through the same

[sinNsincerity]

Thank sir for reading! It's always a pleasure my friend!

[wordman]

you are welcome