Hell Yes

God must dislike me

And think that I’m a peasant

Since I don’t allow you to return back to heaven.

Here’s a whisper,

You are more than I could ever want

Or imagine!

Such a delightful present.

A gift,

An angel,

My love!

Please doll,

Don’t ever stop blessing

Me with your presence.

I’m overwhelmed with joy...

Just like a child with their very first toy!

Reviews

[Sindu]

I agree.. You left us hanging but in smileworthy kind of way ( Smile away)
When I read works like this, very rarely it makes my heart beat. Most of the time I go like.. Cheesy though I like it.
This is somewhere between sweet and raw, just on the edge. Interesting! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Sindu, I really appreciate it!

[Shae]

:-) short and sweet. I like this !

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you once again for reading hon!

[Real Inspiration]

To be honest. I feel as though this needs a couple more sentences. It left me hanging, right as I was getting hooked, it ended.

[sinNsincerity]

That's what I wanted to happen hehe, to leave the reader wanting more, so I'm smiling right now.
read moreThat's what I wanted to happen hehe, to leave the reader wanting more, so I'm smiling right now.
Thank you for reading!

[Real Inspiration]

xD haha okay. That makes sense then. It is a good write, I just felt like I was hanging on the edge of a cliff waiting for words to lift me up.

[sinNsincerity]

Kinda like sex lol

[Real Inspiration]

Exactly! lol.

[Madhu]

Such a sweet poem with a powerful beginning! Loved it! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Madhu!

[Abilash Uttama]

such a delightful piece, enjoyed reading it :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading and thinking so!

[SleeplessVolcano]

This is a great write! Those angels we find we want to hold on to for all our worth!

:)

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you for reading!
Indeed i do try to hold on for all their worth!

[wordman]

once you find that angel,it`s hard to let go ,hell no

[sinNsincerity]

Hell no indeed!
Thank you Sir!

[wordman]

u are welcome

[Jen]

Loving poetry, nothing better! This is sweet and full of expression, I like it!!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you like it Jen.
Thank you so much for reading, I really appreciate it!

[JayceeC]

This is one of my faves by you I think. The flow of the lines are great..The tone is sweet, but I still here that old pick up line running through. "Did it hurt when you fell from heaven?" But there is also a lot of love and joy here. This is one of the best I think if a bit more forward than your usual writes. 100 on this

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you Jan. That means so much to me!

[yvo miki]

what a sweet poem loved it

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading hon.

[yvo miki]

ur so very welcome