The Ms. who Missed Mr. Mystery

You're a beautiful butterfly

While,

I'm everything but free.

Please!

Ms...?

I love you like a second.

Miss-Stress.

No mistrust.

Do you believe in us?

I'm so stressed,

But all that can all go away

In a second.

Do you have one?

Because I have an abundance for you.

No interview.

It's quite interesting,

Rather yet,

Intriguing.

More like a mystery...

Mr.-ry..?

No need for history

'Cause we have great chemistry.

I'm an alchemist when it comes

To the development of poetry.

Turning nothing into something.

So watch your step 

When you travel across my step-less chest.

Dive in.

Please chime in

Before I have to

Die

&

Resurrect

Again...

Amen!

Reviews

[J. K. Hannah]

Your word play and twisting ideas reminds me of another author.. and it isn't coming to me who! It's so unhelpful to say, but I have an image in my head of a story s/he wrote but can't recall the full story or the author... I hope of think of them so I can let you know.

Anyway, it's a really interesting and fresh style. Fun to read but not playful- serious without being serious.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm not to sure of the writer you speak of, but now I'm curious...
I don't like to read too much which is ironic, but I just try to bring something new based on my life experiences...

[J. K. Hannah]

That is ironic! I will try to remember who it is...

[Chopstix]

"I don't like to read too much."

Does that mean you don't read much.

Counterproductive.

How can you bring something new if you don't know what others brought?

BTW "Mr. -ry" alternative "Mr. Rhee"

[sinNsincerity]

The poetry would speak otherwise and for itself.

[trying_to_write]

An intriguing poem, I like the playfulness and light-hearted feelings in it.

[BBP]

Always amazes me how you can play on words like that and keep such a rad flow

[Einstein Noodle]

interesting and fun .. word associations and play make a delightful read tho there is a very serious message ... love and lust do paint their own boundaries ... we simply fail to recognize it at times eh!? the sadness of your speaker comes through in a subtle tone for me ... experiences that still have left an empty and lost place in the heart ... we must resurrect to find ...i like the closing .... Amen! ;)
E.

[annalysiar]

I love the flow of this poem. Amazingly done,

[Wild Rose]

No need for history
We have a great chemistry

Yes > I have heard words to that effect before

So watch your step

Words of an intrigue

[JayceeC]

This clever little piece just became a fave in my library.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm honored! Thank you so much Jan! This one is one of my favorites, so I'm stoked that you enjoyed it.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I love your play with words here creating such vivid, splendid images.
"So watch your step
When you travel across my step-less chest.
Dive in."
Wow! So speechless here.

[sinNsincerity]

I like to let my mind wonder where I dare not go.
And playing with words are fun once you learn how to use them.
This inspires me to continue on writing such writes...

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

This strikes me as more of a rap, but some would say raps are urban poetry set to a beat. I love the flow and words. This is very fresh and hip (do the kids say hip anymore?), you cant help but feel the rhythm and pace of the piece.

[sinNsincerity]

Some others have told me the same, but I would never attempt to rap lol
I did intend to write it in a way where the worlds would roll off the tongue with ease and a pleasure.
I'm always trying to relay how my mind thinks to you all and hope it makes some sort of sense. =D

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice flow of words. I liked them. Made the reader fall into thoughts and possibilities. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Rana]

Wow, how skilfully you juggle with words and connect ideas in here, such a pleasurable read. Was like you were rapping it, some great lyrics. Deliciously witty, absolutely loved it.

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you Rana! I didn't intend for it to sound like a rap.
I just wanted it to roll off the tongue with ease.
Deliciously witty- I love that!
Thank you so much and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. =D