The Ms. who Missed Mr. Mystery

You're a beautiful butterfly

While,

I'm everything but free.

Please!

Ms...?

I love you like a second.

Miss-Stress.

No mistrust.

Do you believe in us?

I'm so stressed,

But all that can all go away

In a second.

Do you have one?

Because I have an abundance for you.

No interview.

It's quite interesting,

Rather yet,

Intriguing.

More like a mystery...

Mr.-ry..?

No need for history

'Cause we have great chemistry.

I'm an alchemist when it comes

To the development of poetry.

Turning nothing into something.

So watch your step 

When you travel across my step-less chest.

Dive in.

Please chime in

Before I have to

Die

&

Resurrect

Again...

Amen!

Reviews

[J. K. Hannah]

Your word play and twisting ideas reminds me of another author.. and it isn't coming to me who! It's so unhelpful to say, but I have an image in my head of a story s/he wrote but can't recall the full story or the author... I hope of think of them so I can let you know.

Anyway, it's a really interesting and fresh style. Fun to read but not playful- serious without being serious.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm not to sure of the writer you speak of, but now I'm curious...
I don't like to read too much which is ironic, but I just try to bring something new based on my life experiences...

[J. K. Hannah]

That is ironic! I will try to remember who it is...

[Chopstix]

"I don't like to read too much."

Does that mean you don't read much.

Counterproductive.

How can you bring something new if you don't know what others brought?

BTW "Mr. -ry" alternative "Mr. Rhee"

[sinNsincerity]

The poetry would speak otherwise and for itself.

[EileenM]

An audacious flirt, this Mr Mystery! You love a play on words, and it works so well in this poem. Well done!

[sinNsincerity]

I love word playing, I get lost and found in it... hehe =D
Thank you Eileen!

[Emily]

Great poem said in a creative way....

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you think so Emily, thank you so much for spending the time to read.

[TheOne&Only]

Lovely write my friend! I enjoyed this piece!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, I put great thought(s) into this one. I didn't want to stop writing it...

[wordman]

david you are certainly creative,a great write

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you kind Sir! My mind is just a dryer set on tumble... hehe =D

[wordman]

just keep it warm my friend

[sinNsincerity]

Winter will be coming soon...

[wordman]

don`t remind me.

[sinNsincerity]

I''ll keep that in mind... hehe