Moon

Moon

A Poem by R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)
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I have created three different poems all with different tunes to them. I thought about titling this the Moon's Triad, but I might be adding more. I think these three lead into each other well. Enjoy.

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The Moon's Eye


The eye of the moon gazes upon the bright twilight of nightshade

Only in ashes may we find turmoil we haven’t buried

The grey clouds swallowing the scarecrows in the smoky mist of the barren mountains

Hacking at the deadwood

Burning bridges between heaven and hell

Taking root in the basement of cardboard box skyscrapers in a city grown tired

Trickling down from the wickermen of wax figures waning under the moon

There is a madness you could never know

Facing the sun, the shadows turn their backs to the wind waking against the dream

Sometimes the dream is just reality

Now isn’t that sad?

The ghostly ghetto of a wasps nest that houses catacombs of honeyed flesh

Taking a bite out of the sunset

Bless the black holes in my veins

Pumping air through the nostrils plugged by fingers crossed

Hoping and praying I’ll choke on my words

And die a better death

Get out of my bed of nails and have my breakfast with all you open coffins

Never has one listened to my whining better than a beaten dog

Pulled by his collar, walking with death

Isn’t man one to say that death is an old friend?

Do you see him often?






Walking with his sugarcane scythe

Smoking gaudy marijuana simmering under the hot summer’s swig of steel

Devilspawn’s anomalous carnivalesque sonata whistling through his teeth

Speaking quadriplegic onomatopoeia

Written on his pigskin cloak flickering rippling like a drop in the ocean

Steering his cathedral to allegiances of ethereal delirium

Driving men mad, who have been hitchhiking immaterial

To reach their final destination

Gaslighting em’ up along the way like a Molotov

Heartstrings plucked by his guitar a husk of hollow words

Living in the present moment pushing past, the future’s execution

The crucible of souls damned by the alloys of time’s malachite

Left behind by the spitting alabaster stars that split the night sky like an atom

Mementos of sentinels bearing the off-brand title waves in the wide eyes of a full moon’s pupil

Facing the sun, a shadow casting mirror images taken by God in his forest of photographs




Moving pictures of frame perfect times gone by

Low key to the puzzle born out of wedlock

Behind the barrel of a gun spitting fireworks from the chambers of a broken heart

Lay it all on the table, for the tables have turned like a record someone broke long ago

It’s funny how you can turn a blind eye to our empty sockets plugged into each other’s harmony

The lunar communion of off-tune nocturnes blossoming from the sarcophagus

Sprouting from the lips of the esophagus, the butterflies in my stomach

Flowers of fairytales that took root in my mouth are finally singing their own songs in my silence

Choking on every word that lost its way

You can eat your heart out and still not feel full

Empty picture frames that borderline the writing on the walls we built around ourselves

The foundation that houses whole stories no one will ever read

Death is an old friend, there for me when no one else was

But I don’t hang with him, I’m a loner

I get a knot in my stomach at the thought of seeing him again

You could offer your heart and wish for the moon to turn the tides of battle

Going through a phase, I thought that a drop in an ocean could still cause a ripple

The waves will follow each other

The sun will bring the shadows to light, and the night will swallow whole cities






And the people will wander endlessly

Until the city stretches its wings over the dawn like a diesel phoenix made of metal casings

Shooting shells firing upon the sky

And the blood moon will look upon it all

Through the eye’s of a homicidal ivory kaleidoscope

A red harvest of every second dripping through the tangled corpse of darkness

To many candled have been blown out

By shotguns leaving heavenly bodies still as water

God is said to be our father

Do you see him often?

Renovating churches, mosques, synagogues for the sheep that prey

Building the brickwork for a stairway to heaven






The path to nowhere stays open

The people are dying to see him

The empty, broken home we all were raised in

Before we too, fell like feathers, or cherry blossoms, in the wind’s baby breath

Adopted by the earth from our incorporeal orphanage

Souls that lost their way home

The conductor of the orchestra born a lunar lunatic

Watching over the cloverfields after dark

Letting the music play scattered offtune notes

Amidst the Salem of graveyard’s silent alabastrine xylophones like children on a playground

I’ve been playing alone ever since I lost my way

The moon keeps its eye on me from a distance

Like an older brother with raven hair darker than hellfire, more priceless than stygian onyx

Waiting for me to fall again

Hoping this time I won’t get back up

And tumble back into waves I have yet to drown under

Only in shallows

Can the castles in the sands of time dream of the abyssal cistern

The gallows of our chains the prisons of bonds I have made with death

Under the watchful eyes of a psychotic moon

That has seen how blinded we by the eclipse of spectre’s souls




Neither fire nor ice

Neither snow nor ash

Just scaling gales of halos in the pleading cathedrals

Climbing each others bodies to reach a higher moon to consume

Manifesto's of maelstroms roaming planewalker's of frozen catacombs

And inferno's journeying through eternities purgatory

Metamorphesized by the cold blue eyes of the moon

And red cloak of rapture unravelling from the enshrouded sun

High enough in the rafters to hang themselves on black paper

Written with pinpricks of ellipsis shapeshifting crippled

And each will beat each other into a grey pulp of worlds

Where alabaster blackness, chiffon obsidian will be one silvery pilgrimage

And death will hold dominion over the four-leaf clovers

That grew from the bottom of the abyss,

And branched into the amphitheatres of heaven's revelation

And infinity will slumber and grow older than the sonder of monoliths, time itself

And forest's will grow from Gods' open mouths

Umbilical guillotines of dreamlands' dwell

Seamstresses weaving rebels in the treble of both heaven and hell



  









Darkness (The Light of This World)


The scattered chasms of Nirvana's jasmine avatars dancing in

Saturn's megalomaniac avalanche of belladonna

Clockwork of mockingbirds perched on steampunk monks listen to the glisten in the distance

Praying to Himalayan urbanization the exoskeleton of metal Valkyries covering the umbrage

Biomechanical calamity spanning Avalon's canopy city’s of veridian

The wings of scrapyard graffiti taped to the aether of gravedigger homo-sapiens

Lifting oblivions’ of infinity, the photosynthesis given to Olympians

Schism of the rhythm of obsidian deliverance

Valhalla's alleyways paved by sable daisies swaying in the waves of faceless civilization

The sun spun by thunderclaps

Rapture's underworld tumbleweeds of clouds howling chords

To the moon's restless exodus of neogenesis

Renaissance to a monarch butterfly of iron skyscrapers afloat

Taking apart the stars and building vermilion soliloquy’s revolt

Of guillotine ventriloquists spreading Armageddon

In meadowland's like heaven’s evangelion

The string's of angel wings, the veil's of fairy-tales

The Salem of creation crashing cardiovascular acrobats

Celestial vessels of velvet melancholy that dwell polyphonic

Sing with their iridescent blessings

Ascending hallucinogenic remedies of biochemical eulogies to the primordial aurora borealis

Cascading raiment of deity's seance enshrouded by hallelujah oozing illumination

Watching the world spin unravelling satellites of cataclysms dining on the Milky Way

Intangible branches of the spiderweb vinyl

Tangled to the music playing braided with reincarnation

Like a drop of the moon hitting the lake in twilight's bloom

That hollow dream of eye's buried watching fostering the blossoms

I used to see the sun buried in the night,

Like my window had been painted over black

And I had stuck pinpricks into pieces of the painted black

So that sainthood would not quite wither

So that pieces of the sun would come through coldblooded as a silver heart

And it came in still as if it were the spirit of a poltergeist I had become

And I realized the moon was just a buried sun

A window that had been painted over

A life that never was what it could be

And I was just the reflection of the light

That, in turn, cast my own shadows

Like a child I never wanted

And then I realized it wasn’t so different from me as a young boy

Looking in the sun and expecting not to go blind

To see everything that blinded me

As if I wasn’t born to be that way

My eye open until it closes like an old wound

Leaving a scar on my featureless face

And the spotlight in nightshade goes out

And my shadow is free

And he leaves me in the dark, again

With my nightingale raven brother

As we watch the nothingness pass me by

Alone

Seeing it all pass me by

A small body collapsed under everything that wasn’t

The scattered chasms of Nirvana's jasmine avatars dancing on

The sun spun by thunderclaps

Like a drop of the moon hitting the lake in twilight's bloom

Widowed to the baptismal limbo of riddles spindled to metaphysical hymnals

Going mad, watching it all fester there in its bright sun, alive

And I, so cold, so, so cold






Wolf’s Wildhunt Under Bloodmoon



 

Starstruck a chord I hang by loose ends that have escaped my grasping claws

Restless notes speak volumes in barcode

The old war wounds of a star-crossed moon

Pockmarked by the artillery of guillotines

Smarting arteries loquacious articulations

Striking the chords of my heartstring’s instrumental

Tuned by luminous muses amused with the fugitive in a cell

Hanging by a double-helixes’ noose

The phoenix obtuse fusing with the communion

Time stalks its prey in the everglades of nightshade

Greyed by the foul shadows’ an hourglass

I walk past the corridor to rigour Mortis

Born formless as the moon upon my palms

In my sweat, leopards of the desolate terrain cry God’s name

Alone in the crowd of deadmen born dead

Dead in their new birth living their paradise

Under the covers of the velvet

Belladonna shivering in obsidian oblivion

Cleaned by the serpentine daydreams of moonbeams dry as my tongue

The empty rays of sunlight set ablaze the inferno’s of Dante’s eternal

The rain batters me as a father

Turned to weak to protect his family from the winds’ scalpel

I guide the shadows’ chapel choir to another battlefield

Raven’s saviours' sabre brazens gracious mayhem

Spades of aegis, the blade’s of graveyard satyrs

Listen to the rain fade like a fallen angel’s soul trickling down the drain

Am I not the one that maims?

You gave me not another name

Towering Gatling cannons of cavernous mandibles

Satanic sabotage of the God’s harbinger

The fog’s offspring forged in the stomach of midnight smith will-o-wisps of the distant crucifixion

Shed light bloodied armour, let the nude illusion of my scarred sculpture arch its back and howl

The darkness’ architecture

A mouth consumes the malleable manifestation of civilization

And the stage which was set darker than the dawns' fingers

Poking through the swirling spiral clouds

Carries on without my act

Or the cross upon my back

Born from psalms of blood pacts

Buried underneath the sabbath of Babylon’s mountain path

Wrath between Elysium’s cracks

Defeated dreamland’s anguish sanguine handicraft

Tumbling in the wind is the humbleness of sin

Wear its emblem on my skin

Graffitied beating hearts of kin

The blood no longer seeps

Between the crevice’s of heaven creep deep beneath bare feet

Unravelling ivory towers of malice

Foul bittersweet words sour, and I swallow my own tongue

Like the burden of the coming Sun

Wiling moon commanding planetary youth

I am the flower (born offtune)

I have yet to bloom










To Valkyries' elsewhere in the translucent juniper's tomb

Bioluminescent sepulchre of an incandescent womb

 



© 2020 R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)


Author's Note

R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)
"The Moon's Eye" was inspired by death, and how close we are to such a man. And how god is not so different. Creating things that die.

"Darkness (the Light of This World)" was created out of the empty loneliness that is what could have been. How things could have been better, for me, and for others.

Finally, "Wolf's Wildhunt Under Bloodmoon" was inspired by the wildhunt, our darker side, the constant fight for survival we all hide from, and a story called Berserk. A comic on loss, and finding your place in a world you cannot change, but never letting it change you. Also, some of the music from an animated version of that comic.

I hope you enjoyed this poems.

Sincerely, R.J Calzonetti

I promise I read every single review, and I generally will reply to them. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be happy to hear anything you feel needs sharing. Whenever you write on my shortcomings or breakthroughs, or the themes of my poems, or share ideas and friendly criticism, it decides my next poem to an extent. I will listen, learn and be thankful. And 99% of the time, you'll get a reply unless you're trolling me.

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I love how the first poem is more conversational than I've ever read you, yet also with clever, powerful wordplay. This line slays me: "Never has one listened to my whining better than a beaten dog" (amen to that!) More of my faves (both in meaning & wordplay):
"Choking on every word that lost its way
You can eat your heart out and still not feel full
Empty picture frames that borderline the writing on the walls we built around ourselves
The foundation that houses whole stories no one will ever read
Death is an old friend, there for me when no one else was
But I don’t hang with him, I’m a loner
I get a knot in my stomach at the thought of seeing him again"

2nd poem -- love the first ten lines, may be one of the most snappy & catchy openings for any of your poems I've read so far -- your wordplay is top notch & becuz you are using some fresh new unusual words, I'm getting a whole new vibe, yet in your old well-crafted style.

Something different occurred to me while reading both poems (I didn't see 3 poems, as you mention in the intro). You speak of death more as a character in your storyline, than as some outside entity hanging around the periphery of what's going on. This makes it seem more of a friendly reference, as if making friends with death, referring to this character as having his morbid or funky characteristics, but not as the all-consuming blob that overtakes our sensibilities with terror. This reminds of how (especially at my age, turning 64 in a couple weeks) we come to make friends with the fact that we are dying & death has no power over me, like it does for many other people. I could die tomorrow & be satisfied with the course of my life . . . some people see this as a creepy death-wish, but your poems read in a similar way to the sensation of embracing death instead of fighting it (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

3 Years Ago

That's interesting. Feeling rather than thinking while writing sounds like a beautiful way to write,.. read more
barleygirl

3 Years Ago

Even tho I'm very grateful to the few friends who are reading my books, I honestly do not care if an.. read more
R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

3 Years Ago

Our brains are interesting things. Writing is very self-serving. I don't think people realize how im.. read more
You ever see the Sam Rockwell movie called "Moon"?

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R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

3 Years Ago

I haven’t, but if it’s good I’ll definitely check it out. What’s it about?
Davidgeo

3 Years Ago

Mining the Moon for natural resource.
R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

3 Years Ago

I’ll check it out if I can get it through the public library in my city. Sometimes they have onlin.. read more
maybe this is the preverbal third eye that is watching over creation

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R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

3 Years Ago

Yes, definitely something along the lines of that.
 wordman

3 Years Ago

you`re welcome
Woah oh my , another extraordinary muse, creatively expressed imaginatively, featuring the grim reaper that seems real active nowadays.bi was admiring many phrasings such as ghastly nests of wasps and the moon mentions and many others. Kudos for this epic!!

Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too, right on top of my page.

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R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

3 Years Ago

I certainly will read your poem. Thank you for enjoying mine! :)
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From the entire poem I fetch this...
"Death is an old friend, there for me when no one else was
But I don’t hang with him, I’m a loner
I get a knot in my stomach at the thought of seeing him again
You could offer your heart and wish for the moon to turn the tide
Going through a phase, I thought that a drop in an ocean could still cause a ripple
The waves will follow each other"
This was my favorite part. Sounds like you spy into my brain often now! Haha... XD. Well it's a coincidence that I thought of something exactly like this but it was difficult to translate, however you have an advantage. I'm just amazed.

I don't think you consider yourself a piece of iron and platinum doesn't rust! *think*

Keep Writing!

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R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

3 Years Ago

Thanks Aurora, I'll definitely try to write something great soon, and in a few days or so I'll proba.. read more
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3 Years Ago

Alright... That's great. I saw the newer parts too, it's nice!
And Thanks.

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