In Love

In Love

A Poem by Enigma
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Well, another romantic rhyme-filled write, lol...

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 I'm loving you, I cannot believe

I'm loving as if this is my destiny

I'm loving and I cannot decide
What to do when you flash that smile

of yours, that spins my head
There's nowhere I'd be instead
To have the guts to say it right
Not to repeat it in my head all night
Just this once, to let you know
I'm in love with you...oh

I'm loving you and everything else
I'm changed, everyone can tell
I'm loving things I hated before
The world seems so much better oh..

Just the sight of you, it spins my head
There's nowhere I'd be instead
To have the guts to say it right
Not to repeat it in my head all night
Just this once, to let you know
I'm in love with you...
That I'm in love with you...
In love with you...yeah

© 2009 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
so, umm...did u like it? I originally, sang the first two lines randomly, forgot them, made a fuss then at last wrote all this down. I got a tune for this in my head too, haha

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I wanna hear your tune :P I tried singing it to myself XD
Great piece, lovely, and flowed great. Good job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome!!!!!!!! i really liked your romantic rhyming poem... great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My god, I loved it! The flow was amazing... and it's perfect for lyrics, too, not just poetry. Hehe, sang it as well. :] *Blows you a kiss.* Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this. It would be good to be able to hear it to the tune that you have in mind. Lovely as a poem though. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 8, 2009

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Enigma
Enigma

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