Protector

A haiku about making a person feel loved when they need it.

Clutch me when I'm weak

and hold me securely so

I can become strong 

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

A great poem. Okay, clarify for me, how this is haiku? I am not being facetious, just wondering, is it not more a senryu?

[Persona]

It's a haiku, count the syllables

[Fenix Flight]

So this poem had me from the Picture. (BUFFY AND ANGEL) and then I read the actual poem. Short sweet to the point. Packs a lot of deep raw emotions in just a few short lines. Very well written. 100/100

[Persona]

Thank you. :)

[Thea]

Aw. I love haikus. This was short but provoking. Can be a great prompt for a short story. Definitely liked it. Beautiful and nicely-penned. Speaks love and affection. Great one! ^^

[Persona]

Thank you, that's very nice of you. :)

[Thea]

You're welcome. :)

[Kyle Sky]

Simple and expressive. Great job

[Jem Sagcal]

A simple haiku, but depicts powerful emotions that convey a powerful trust. Amazing.

[Persona]

Thanks Jem!

[Felecia]

Simple and great. Love it

[Persona]

Thanks Felecia!

[Hester Vane]

Short, simple but powerful! Great Stuff

[Persona]

Thank you Hester

[Cara]

very nice

[Persona]

Thank you Cara

[Krista Weiss]

Really cute! Great job! :)

[Persona]

Thank you

[WingsToFly]

Good one