Melting

Melting

A Poem by Skia1717
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Written on the hardest first day of school in my life.

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I thought I was fine,
Thought I had control,
Of the feelings I hide, I have to...
I'd caused too much pain,
Just trying my best,
To expect you to feel what I do...

We never had that,
We never did share,
What I feel without doubt or mistrust...
I thought I was fine,
I'd dimmed the hot flames,
I'd buried the longing in dust...

But summer did end,
Came back to our haunts,
I saw you, and again, my love bled...
Your eyes and your voice,
Soft short light brown hair,
I fell all over again.
I melted.

© 2012 Skia1717


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this is a great and awesome poem I can really relate to this... I also caused too much pain on others and it really hurts to keep my feeelings... because I keep it... It hurts too much
(:

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think I know how this is about...very good, though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's really good I gave it 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Skia1717

11 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
I can relate to this well. awesome job. sucks huh

Posted 11 Years Ago


Skia1717

11 Years Ago

Yeah...
I like this a lot. Me and my ex go to the same University, so seeing him is hard. I feel your pain.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Skia1717

11 Years Ago

Thanks. The saddest part is I didn't even get a chance to date him.

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Added on August 23, 2012
Last Updated on August 23, 2012
Tags: Longing, Lonely, Missing, Love, Sorrow, Desperation

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Skia1717
Skia1717

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