wounded me

I felt no pain

I seen you aim

I heard you shoot

Yet I’m bleeding and I feel nothing

As I see the wound bleeding

I feel the sting

 

I fall in shock

How my best friend

Has shot me

The love of my life

Has wounded me

 

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

Very honest and beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing

[Sunny Skye]

Am glad you like it. Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Remind me of a old TV movie. A shot through the heart to end a love affair. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you for reading

[Steven Cash]

Ooooh love the symbols

98/100

[Sunny Skye]

Glad you liked it. Thank you