Only I know Your Face...

Only I know Your Face...

A Poem by Amanda J. S.
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Well... A poem about how possessive some lovers tend to get.

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Only I Know Your Face.
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Show me your face.

Show me your soul.

We own the night.

We alone.

You are not a knight of the day.

Too bright for the daylight.

People would simply go blind,

Looking at both you and the sun combined.

Loving you is hard,

For everyone wants you.

Everyone adores you.

Offers themselves to you,

My love.

But I can spot your soul.

The one behind your mask of glory.

My hero.

My hero alone.

In all your glory,

You are humble when we are united.

Please, love

Don’t let them take you away from me.

© 2012 Amanda J. S.


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It's all about love and love and love of someone... with whom you wanna live your life happily and don't want anyone to let your love take away from you... from your heart. You want to make your days and nights in your life, you want to be alive all the time in the arms of someone's life. You want to love, you want to shy, you want to be in the heart and you want to be a soul of love that's alive in the heart. That's all i just got right from the poem. I enjoyed this beautiful loving piece once again, your talent's creative dear and i'm really very enjoying reading your writes. Brilliant job with an excellent imaginary once again ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

6 Years Ago

Thank you, once again :-)
I like the flow of thoughts and the good description. Love make us crazy. We want to hold on and protect.
"But I can spot your soul.
The one behind your mask of glory."
Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wonderful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice write.... I love the flow... Reaching out to the soul of a person can do wonders in a relationship... such is the power of true love...Your poem delivers the message with clarity.. it's one of those that demand no double meanings and is quite readable... Good one :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
this is one awesome poem!
I love the way your emotions are portrayed. I can connect to them. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you! ^^
Loving you is hard,

For everyone wants you.

Everyone adores you.

Offers themselves to you,

Those are my favorite lines ! I feel that way for someone. This is an awesome poem. Great job !

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Erica ^^
The format is beautiful and suits the piece perfectly. Emotional and sincere.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :o)
Awh, I love this! It is so sweet and sad at the same time. You can really feel the emotion in this piece, love it, just like all of your other pieces :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much :o)
Ella

7 Years Ago

Welcome :)
I like the way its written, it flows much more smoothly. The message is sweet too.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
nice expression and flow of .............


Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Of what? ^^

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Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark



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