Where to Draw The Line?

Where to Draw The Line?

A Poem by Amanda J. S.

Where to Draw The Line?
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My mind.

How can one describe my mind?

Is it sane?

Insane?

And what is sane?

What is insane?

Is a sane mind

One that looks like the others?

And the other way around with an insane one?

Please,

Give me an answer,

For I really want to know.

What is your answer?

You don’t know?

I knew you didn’t.

Because nobody knows what makes us different.

Nobody really knows.

Yes,

Everyone can see the difference between a psychopath

And a “normal” person.

But where does one draw the line?

I don’t think anyone has an answer,

Because I don’t think there is one.

© 2018 Amanda J. S.


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This really messed with my head...Brilliant!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


You've lived life realizing your different, right? Right. Poets are a breed of their own and how humanity has missed categorizing us apart from grouping us with the artistic souls I don't know. We see too keenly and feel too deeply and are mocked as sensitive souls, but in the end humanity looks to us to feel and know they are alive. On the edge of feeling we question our sanity. We are sane, they are dead. Nice write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

I find your review very interesting. You have lots if strong opinions. Thanks for the read ;-)
There is a fine line between sanity and insanity. We all walk the line and can fall in either direction. I must stop the madness sometime in my head. Focus on good things. The topic is a interesting one. The mind is only being used at a 3% of it's ability. They say. If we open up the mind more. There will be more talented people and more insanity. You can see too much. A powerful poem. Open the door to a fun discussion. A outstanding poem.
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Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I am do glad you liked the poem :o)
The questions brought up in this really make you think, as does this entire piece. I really enjoyed it and trying to answer the questions in my own mind. Lovely job. c:

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
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I agree. People are not crazy, it is society that makes you think your crazy.We all have different brain chemistry, which makes us who we are. Just because people are not in the average spectrum..does not mean they are bad

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Exactly! ^^
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I'm pretty sure normal doesn't exist anymore lol :P Everyone is at least a twirk bit off in their minds. Cool poem. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much! ^^
Not many are able nor are willing to attempt to describe their minds nowadays. It's never easy to say what you're thinking or even if they would make sense once you say them. Some thoughts are sane, others are not...but it's up to you to make that desicion to which are and which aren't.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I Am Svetlana

7 Years Ago

Message me?? :)
Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Okay ^^
I Am Svetlana

7 Years Ago

:)
It's true, really

I've been thinking about that a while.

One typo, though. You said 'fore' instead of 'for'

amazing job though as usual

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you! ^^
Is like saying everyone is unique but if you look at it we all the same because everyone is unique, get it? Lol i know confusing. I enjoyed this poem it is very well written and i like the flow to it, I also agree with fancyfati i also got confused at the beggining with the sane and insane part but i cought on. Thank you for the excellent read. Good Job!

-SkyeBlanco

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very, very much! ^^
woooow.in start i actually got confuse with all teh sane and insane..got me wondering..lolz...very well written a beautiful end....you have written on a wonderful point....its true u can never differentitae..well doen

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda J. S.

7 Years Ago

Thank you! ^^

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Amanda J. S.

Writersville, Denmark



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