A single yellow Rose

A single yellow Rose

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Love and the Poor Man

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A single yellow Rose
Is all I had to propose
I didn't have a ring for your finger
But I gave my heart of gold

You still accepted me
Because of the Love 
You showed for me
It started with a hug underneath the apple tree

Now we are going to start
A life together you and me
So romantic wait and see
My love will grow each day for thee

Now we will confess our love
Before our friends and family
and will live together forever and a day
Till the sun does no longer rise in the eastern skies


© 2015 SmittyJas


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I love the purity of love expressed here. The concept that love truly does not cost a thing is so undervalued in today's society. I respect that you have taken your words and emphasized this message. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


a sweet write smitty,loved the rose

Posted 9 Years Ago


How sweet and romantic, how could she turn down such sweetness. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


Your writing is so fluent and graceful! This is beautiful, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I'll bet with a love like that your lady needed no ring of gold. Sweet and heartfelt and destined to make all the single ladies wistful. Lovely poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful poem full of love. The idea of the yellow rose really worked. I'm sure any woman would have been pleased to receive that whilst being proposed to. Good work!

Helena (Blue Rose)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Smitty: Stopped at a heart made of gold and it is beautiful! Now, what honesty in the second stanza: I visualize you and her under that tree: (to me, the rose should suffice); Till the sun no longer rises in the eastern skies: This is how love is and should be; what lovely words and flow; I always love your writings; they come from the heart..it's like the dream we all desire...what a lovely visual you have formed in my mind. The title: A single yellow Rose I love, how gorgeous it is. Keep writing so I can smile more. Wow. Thank you so much -

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on March 4, 2015
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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..

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