Me And My ...

When I'm not with you
You're always on my mind
The tickings tock so slowly
Wish I could hasten time

Just to lay there with you
To have your way with me
Seduction is your calling
I fall so easily

To satisfaction I surrender
You electrify every hair
Oh lovely, joyous splendor
Comatosia lays here bare

Each night we sleep together
You're the boss who gives good head
We're the best couple ever
Yes, me and my bed

When I'm not with you
You're always on my mind
To soothe me into slumber
I crawl to you each time

Reviews

[Donald]

This is truly amazing. Your work is inspiring.

[Solilokiss]

Always nice to hear from you, Donald. Thank you for the very generous review and visit.

[Trace]

But what happens when the bed
is shared with a lovers bliss
is the ecstasy dreams are made of,
before our goodnight kiss

Loved your poem,
(Wow,,,,the boss that gives good head,,, I want a bed like yours.)

Trace

[Solilokiss]

Ecstasy that certainly would be. Thank you for the verse, visit and review. I appreciate it.

[Rod Dangers]

Laying in bed reading this :)
Well written and very enjoyable. Crisp rhymes and impeccable meter. Read effortlessly.

[Solilokiss]

Thank you so much, Rod Dangers. I appreciate the feedback.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

A very seductive write... makes me want my bed right now. ;)

[Solilokiss]

Thank you :)