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When sadistic brutality becomes an inspiration.

Inimical miscreants, devout heathens I slay

Convoluted wretches, to Belial you pray

Rise! As necromantic overtures sing

Cry! For all the suffering it brings.

 

Infidels rejoicing across the lands

Bow down fiends to apocalyptic hands

And in the hour of judgment day exist

No excruciation you can ever resist.

 

The blacken skies now rains of viscera

The ethereal damned breeds the anathema

Pestilence feeds, consuming the undead

Way beneath the trenches of dread

Author's Note

I've had this writing a few months back, forgot to post it as I was still in the middle of a writer's block phenomena. sigh

Reviews

[pasdepoisson]

Yes! The dark masses yield, command your followers!

[MoriartyMesa]

If i was to say; 'what would be a great phrasing and quoting in a O.T. movie, like Django or Pulp Fiction?" this would be hit, the images flash and the ending is nice, smooth, and not unlike half a glass of whiskey, keeps the fire in,what!

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Haha. Thank you so much. Appreciate it.

[Rob Santana]

This is crazy brutal!!! Killer vocab, insane!!! I like this alot. Sadisitc brutality (all me).........it hurts so good, hahaha!!!

[Fréyjä Helvití]

I knew you'd like this one. Haha. Thanks Creeper

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

People like Charles Manson and Hitler come to mind as I read this... I could never understand how so many could follow people like this. Fair to say your writer's block is gone cause this was awesomely written.

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Often times violence and aggression could be good inspirations. To some perhaps that draws interest in them. Thank you so much