Something, someday

Something, someday

A Poem by Suditi

Something, someday.

Something tells me, I can.
Something tells me I will.
Something tells me I'll make it there,
Something tells me I'll kill,
All my fears, which hold me back,
Despite the weaknesses, 
the perfection which I lack.
Shut all those, who think, 
I'm not good enough.
All those who say,
I wont make it through the rough.

Someday, I would have moved the mountain,
Someday, I would have crossed the fence,
Someday, it will all prove to be worth,
Someday, it will all make sense.

I know I have it somewhere,
What makes me different from others,
By own unique bit,
Someday, I know,
I would have found it.

© 2012 Suditi


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Lovely piece with a good flow, the concept is realy inspirational, especially after the first stabza. The middle stanza seemed to reach out for me, told me that everything I cace right now will be worth it later. Anyways, this poem could be thought of as a voice inside of you telling you to hold on. Amazing, just simply amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


We're all privileged to read such seamless rhyme flow, cadence, and stanza structure. the idea of the sought after "it" is a theme i am reading over numerous of your pieces. There is profound hope in the vision of your speaker, which is deeply moving to witness. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It rolls and rolls and rolls like summoned molasses and youthful wisdoms. A very worthy read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


an inspiring strong write, full of possibilities. well penned. enjoyed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


something = this is you :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a very good poem. I can remember it like I remember a song.

Despite the weaknesses,
the perfection which I lack.
Shut all those, who think,
I'm not good enough.

It's simply harmonious. The words seems to flow as easy on my lips. You've done a great job. My applause. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Symbolizes hope & trust in a big way :) Nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


:) very creative! 100 for this poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love the vase you have drown here but i adore the flowers you have put in it. great work, nice images, good word picking, it is really great totally. thank you for sharing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 20, 2012
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Tags: something, career, belief, faith, failure, fall

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Suditi
Suditi

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