The Firecracker

The Firecracker

A Poem by Suhd
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Love's a cracker

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Love's a cracker 
Sputter, Hiss, Whoosh, Flash, Crackle, Bang.
That's it.

© 2017 Suhd


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I get it. A very interesting way to look at love. I see the way you have depicted the emergence and growth of love. I wonder if the 'that's it' means that once you've reached the bang there is nothing else or if it means something else altogether. Or as well that love burns brightly for a short period and then wanes into nothingness. Let me know if I am right or wrong. Either way I love it

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

You are absolutely right on target. Thanks much for reading and reviewing it. Glad you like it.
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Very much so, Suhd. Very much so!

And more often than not, that cracker explodes in our faces.

Universal truth in so few words. Well Done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Haha, truth peeps from behind those words. Well observed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thank you Zoe :)
Zoya

6 Years Ago

No problem
very short but means a lot. and it's honestly so accurate as well

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot xoxo... :)
Very short but says so much.
A few simple words in how you can relate the feelings of love to a fire cracker.
Quite creative and different I liked it.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

7 Years Ago

Thanks much :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Years Ago

Your welcomez :)
That was different. I can see the humor in it though . Good work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

7 Years Ago

Thanks much...!
Cynical... but well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

7 Years Ago

Thanks much :)

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