I'm Sick

I'm Sick

A Poem by Suhd


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I think this is actually a very clever poem. Your use of the word 'schizophrenia' is, I think, an ironic play on the word. We all of us hear our 'inner voice' all of the time. In the illness of schizophrenia that 'inner voice' goes wrong. Your poem is particularly poignant ,because in the Illness, that 'voice' is often heard when one is alone. I very much doubt if you have actually got schizophrenia .......have you?


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the support and kindness and sharing your story with me.
I wish you good mental h.. read more
barleygirl

2 Years Ago

WOW! I can't even say a word becuz this conversation says it all! I wasn't sure how to read this poe.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

2 Years Ago

Lovely to see you here, Barleygirl. Sometimes affliction, or should I say 'adversity' can be very he.. read more



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Having worked with many schizophrenic people I can relate to this one. It has a poignancy, a stark down to earth this is what it is.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

2 Years Ago

Thank you John. Glad you stopped by.
Beautiful
Love it
Thanks for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Suhd

2 Years Ago

Thank you.
I like the picture of a single track railway
It is a bit hazy > is that you
Single, Alone ?
even in a crowd
Hazy feel to be in another place

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Suhd

2 Years Ago

Thanks my friend. Yeah, even in a crowd.
Very clever poem. I suffer from mental illnesses due to my upbringing and I’ve also been diagnosed with schizophrenia.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Suhd

2 Years Ago

I appreciate your review and I totally empathize with you friend. Wish you good health!
Endless depth residing in this write....
Schizophrenia is no normal illness but a messy and confusing condition of mind and senses....that means you've included an intense loneliness here....
Thanks for sharing this one! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Suhd

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Tahsin. You understood well :)
Tahsin (Taah-scene)

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!😇😇
Illness can be fought if we know we have. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts my friend.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


Suhd

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, my friend :)
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Very deep words, Suhd.

I like the presentation of this piece; those lonely railtracks passing through an Autumn falling is very symbolic of the words and the illness. Whatever the case, there is no disputing the beauty of your poetry. It is as clear as a Summer Sky.

Nicely conceived, my friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Doodley! You are so kind.
I think this is actually a very clever poem. Your use of the word 'schizophrenia' is, I think, an ironic play on the word. We all of us hear our 'inner voice' all of the time. In the illness of schizophrenia that 'inner voice' goes wrong. Your poem is particularly poignant ,because in the Illness, that 'voice' is often heard when one is alone. I very much doubt if you have actually got schizophrenia .......have you?


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the support and kindness and sharing your story with me.
I wish you good mental h.. read more
barleygirl

2 Years Ago

WOW! I can't even say a word becuz this conversation says it all! I wasn't sure how to read this poe.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

2 Years Ago

Lovely to see you here, Barleygirl. Sometimes affliction, or should I say 'adversity' can be very he.. read more
I love how short this poem is but it's so god damn powerful. Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
It is an affliction indeed. God help those who have it. Need medical attention. Short and powerful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Suhd

2 Years Ago

Amen to that. Thanks for stopping by.

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