Kind

Written after witnessing a homeless share his food with street dogs...

the kind are always desired,

yet disrespected and abused,

yet he can never be fooled,

but he wont tell you anything,

he knows his ugliness, and yours,

and he also knows the unrealized goodness in everyone,

thus, he doesn't expect goodness,

he simply sees goodness hidden inside evil.

he doesn't ask or seek respect,

because respect is the language,

of the ones who respect themselves,

and that he knows love can only be given, 

and not received, only giving is receiving,,,,

his intelligence is of higher order,

he forgives and wishes you best,

he knows the cunning ways of the successful,

but success is not his focus,

his focus is in harmony,

he will never talk high of himself,

and may even sound stupid intentionally,

not because his principle is humble,

but because he doesn't want to hurt your ego,

and it would be painful a task for you,

to get through the hurt and revive again,

he doesn't want to hurt anyone,

just because he knows the pain of hurt,

intelligence of kindness is the most beautiful, 

subtle, and pure form of intelligence,,,,

it never speaks for itself, 

to listen to it, u have to speak in same way,

most of the times, it even escapes the ears 

of the one who speaks it,

it is a very relaxing and hearty affair,

pride, honor, greed and pleasure is sacrificed,

for that little voice in the heart which always says,

that truth is beautiful, love is beautiful,

and beauty is the only way,

and that magic is the only reality,,,,,

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

to meet such people who are selfless and giving is such a heartwarming experience indeed.. this write is deep and moving.. the true beauty lies in the intentions and hearts of others... I would suggest changing a few words to cut out on some of the repetition to make it more powerful.. overall really nice job in this "story telling" piece...

[Sunya]

Change which words? yes it is a heartwarming experience :)

[AprilRN1210]

most of them are just preference of course as the flow of ideas is done beautifully here.. just something I do.. for example, (and I know why you did it--does reinforce the idea) you used "goodness" in 3 lines back to back.. was just a suggestion.. it really is informal and comfortable as is, like listening to someone "intimately" tell you a story..

[Sunya]

yea i've used that word a lot of time :/ and yes it does reinforce the idea..why didn't i think of it..thankyou for the tips :) yea most of my writings involve story telling :p not much focus in rhymes and crazy words :p hehe not being sarcastic about anything

[AprilRN1210]

I know.... you write beautifully, in YOUR voice, in your style and it is awesome...

[Sunya]

thankyou for being so 'polite' ;) hehe no seriously thankyou..coming from someone who writes so well, it means so much to me :) you are so very kind

[AprilRN1210]

you "are" welcome :P
(couldn't resist!)