Like a leaf....quietly

Like a leaf....quietly

A Poem by Sunya
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quietly i gaze,
hanging upon my thoughts,
like a leaf gazing,
hanging upon the branches,

quietly i swing,
with the flow of emotions,
like a leaf swinging,
with the flow of the breeze,

quietly i breathe,
the air of silence,
like a leave breathing,
the air of existence,

quietly i create,
new songs in wonder,
like a leaf creating,
oxygen in atmosphere,

quietly i fall,
down within myself,
like a leaf falling,
down into the earth,

quietly i disappear,
into this silence,
like a leaf disappearing, 
into the nature,
without making a sound,
quietly....

© 2014 Sunya


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I love the stillness and introspection this represents, combined with the feel of the season, it's like a meditation on your page, 'like a leaf creating,oxygen in atmosphere' you've captured a luverly sentiment Sunya :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

7 Years Ago

Thankyou ma'am :) I am glad you enjoyed it :)
the subtle use of repetition is powerful in its whisper... This poem is dreamy.. I really enjoyed this.. It flowed like melted chocolate, taking the reader on this introspective and teaching journey into the mind of the reader... beautiful... one of my favorites of yours...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

7 Years Ago

yum yum melted chocolate :D thankyou missy you as sweet as always :) i am glad that 'you' enjoyed it.. read more

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Sunya
Sunya

Kathmandu, Lalitpur, Nepal



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