Like a leaf....quietly

quietly i gaze,
hanging upon my thoughts,
like a leaf gazing,
hanging upon the branches,

quietly i swing,
with the flow of emotions,
like a leaf swinging,
with the flow of the breeze,

quietly i breathe,
the air of silence,
like a leave breathing,
the air of existence,

quietly i create,
new songs in wonder,
like a leaf creating,
oxygen in atmosphere,

quietly i fall,
down within myself,
like a leaf falling,
down into the earth,

quietly i disappear,
into this silence,
like a leaf disappearing, 
into the nature,
without making a sound,
quietly....

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I love the stillness and introspection this represents, combined with the feel of the season, it's like a meditation on your page, 'like a leaf creating,oxygen in atmosphere' you've captured a luverly sentiment Sunya :)

[Sunya]

Thankyou ma'am :) I am glad you enjoyed it :)

[AprilRN1210]

the subtle use of repetition is powerful in its whisper... This poem is dreamy.. I really enjoyed this.. It flowed like melted chocolate, taking the reader on this introspective and teaching journey into the mind of the reader... beautiful... one of my favorites of yours...

[Sunya]

yum yum melted chocolate :D thankyou missy you as sweet as always :) i am glad that 'you' enjoyed it ;) :p hehe nice to "see" you stop by :D