Truth..

Why is it hidden?

Where is the truth hidden?
Behind the flawless modern beasts or
Behind the flawless emotions of
Ancient man, is it that way?.

Is it that you are hiding the bonding spirit
Made us together or you just dont need me?
Your tears say it all but you are 
A modern beast leaving this ancient man behind.

Why do you cry, when I'm sobbing here,
Is it this way you desired to see me
Or is it my hallucination seeing you cry,
Anyway am fed up with these modern pschology..

Am fed up with the society,
Am fed up with the beasts here,
Am fed up with you,
Am fed up with me.

Just a tree I deserve,
Just a smoke I love,
Just a flame burning in me,
Just me I want to be..

Reviews

[wordman]

we all get tired of the way things are
but we wake up and make changes

[Surya]

Yeah one day we wake up and change....Thank you..:)

[writ rajat]

Wow it shows the plethora of illusion
Intelligently written and got emotion's ocean in it and going to be much better if rewritten

[Surya]

Haan, I try for it...Thank you Rajat for your kind visit and words..:)

[writ rajat]

Ty for your words

[Valentine]

We are what God plants inside of us but it is up to us just how much those things planted grow. Valentine

[Tbear]

Glad I stopped by.. You have a way with a question that turns around to question self and the world... I shall be reading more of you.. write on..

[Surya]

Am honoured and am glad with your words...Hope your views....
Thank you Tbear for your time reading this write and reviewing...:)

[Manasa.L]

Everyone finally comes back to those trees from which they were branched out and became a separate tree. Life at some point makes us realize that we should be what we are even when changes are inevitable. We have to keep up with the world and also be ourselves.
I loved the message your poem has conveyed. Thank u for sharing:)

[Surya]

Thanks Manasa for your kind visit and words..

[CAPOLAVORO]

I got mixed feeling with this one. Begging for truth in romance or just mere view of reality? Anyways, this line made me think it is the former.

"Why do you cry, when I'm sobbing here,
Is it this way you desired to see me
Or is it my hallucination seeing you cry,
Anyway am fed up with these modern pschology..
"
Either way, it is wonderful Seeking for the truth is never easy.

[Surya]

Seeking for truth is truly never easy....your mix feeling here is true, that's what I tried to convey...
Thank you for your visit..

[CAPOLAVORO]

You're welcome.

[Asmae]

"Just a tree I deserve,
Just a smoke I love,
Just a flame burning in me,
Just me I want to be.. "
i f*****g love this.

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you Asmae for your kind visit and review..

[Pravir]

Bro u have a great way to decorate your poem with such strong words containing a thousand feelings. . . very nice work :-)

[Surya]

Thank you Pravir for visiting and appreciating, I enjoyed your view...hope the same goes...Thank you..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Am fed up with the society,
Am fed up with the beasts here,
Am fed up with you,
Am fed up with me.
I liked these lines. This poem shows the true emotion one feels when they are in grief.

[Surya]

Thank you dear for your kind visit, I always feel that am in a circus but today it came out as a poem...

[Najam Us Saher]

A circus...? I didn't get you.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Where is the truth hidden?
Behind the flawless modern beasts or
Behind the flawless emotions of
Ancient man, is it that way?. "

Nice lines here. Seeking truth can be hard sometimes.

A nice message conveyed here. Good work 👍

[Surya]

Thanks alot Yumna, I will correct them for sure..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Surya! A pleasure 😊