Mom...

The very first day of my life you believed in me,
Everyday may not be a day without you,
Everyday doesn't seem to pass without your voice,
Everyday is worthy with your beautiful eyes,
Every word from you is music for me,
My dear mom it's your day, Mother's Day,
Now a days I miss you more and more
seeing true colours of this filthy world,
But I found one friend same like you,
Cares a lot and hates a lot, but she is you,
Though she couldn't match you,
Mom, a word means my world,
Thank you,
For your patience at my stupidity,
For tolerating me as who am,
For Being my mom, Love you beauty...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and wonderful words for your mother.
"For your patience at my stupidity,
For tolerating me as who am,
For Being my mom, Love you beauty..."
I liked the above lines a lot. You honored yourself and your mother with the outstanding poetry. I did like this one my friend Surya.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you so much sir John...am glad you liked it...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.

[Najam Us Saher]

Truly beautifully written. You are lucky.

[Surya]

Yes am, I feel so....Thank you So much Saher......:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good write surya, truly "mom" means life..

[Surya]

Yeah I totally agree...Thank you Farhan...:)

[Priyanshi]

Truly well expressed your emotions, Surya..... a suitable poem to wish and thanks mother.
"Cares a lot and hates a lot, but she is you,
Though she couldn't match you,
Mom, a word means my world, ....." Lovely lines.

[Surya]

haha, just a way to thank my mom, it's less to her but this is all I had to show my love.....
Thank you Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

Pleasure is mine.